Comments by dwells
- "That last state of grace...we are fortunate if we are allowed more than one or two, and beyond blessed for a third. So good to read you again Sean and the closing LH/RH business was striking once deciphered. Cheers my friend! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Jade To Black" by Sean Mc Shane
- "A softly spoken tribute and profession of a love that was, and will be; if only in memory. Prayerful and poignant perfection - well said Sean! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Heavenly Fire" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Sounds like a long distance romance that only becomes more heated in the absence Sean. Nothing better than the soothing beat of angel wings to cool the fevered brow. Keep those horns filed and she'll never know (yes she will) - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Our Everything" by Sean Mc Shane
- "It's not such a long time, really. Nice imagery Sean and the couplets gave just the right amount of roominess to let it sink-in and yet convey the feeling of space. BTW - nobody ever mentions the much neglected inner rim. Sweetly said laddie!"
Posted by dwells on "Always and Forever" by Sean Mc Shane
- "A noble endeavor to be sure: and leave a few books of craziness, sleazy, mindless, perversity, and wanton / wayward wisdom for my contribution (got to keep it interesting). Labella Blue is a treasure beyond the smoothness of her tranquil name. Cheers guys!"
Posted by dwells on "One Thousand in One Thousand" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Aye Sean - last line first stanza "a part" maybe? But then it does work both ways too! You are getting squishy on me and I shall now write a poem that you just inspired with "Fields of Fried Chicken" (like my brain) - cheers laddie!"
Posted by dwells on "Twilight Star" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Eh Sean this is a schwanze song if I ever heard one. Think I'll email you with a riposte (whatever that is) - cheers and don't look back laddie."
Posted by dwells on "Epic Ending" by Sean Mc Shane
- "In the land of the blind, the man with one eye is king...
Feeling numb is OK - just a precursor to feeling something else in the spectrum of feelings.
I watched my poetry turn to shit, and knew it was time to make some changes. Meanwhile, fighting much of the same emotions, or lack of . When hard-earned respect has fled, anything goes in the backdraft to someplace else. Burning bridges and moving-on (now where did that come from?). Cheers Sean!"
Posted by dwells on " Feeling Numb" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Sean you old softie! This was extravagantly evangelizing the female pulchritude that exudes control in all we say and do. Just keep it quiet lest they know the power they hold in delicate hands and iron wills, cheers lad!"
Posted by dwells on "The Little Things" by Sean Mc Shane
- "A Sothern Belle of rare pedigree
Until you got her knickers down
On the red velvet swing
Under Spanish moss
Swinging free"
Posted by dwells on " Ball Nut pt I" by Sean Mc Shane
- "My fav was "The Riders of Rohan" when Eowin killed the top dragon rider, no son born of man was she!
This was a proud proclamation that I could now say about wife #2 in hindsight (better late than never / she knows it) Cheers Irish! "
Posted by dwells on "Maiden of My Mind" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Masterfully wrought to tie it up in one neat package. The universal female maybe, marvelous and I too know her name, or used to, cheers!
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Posted by dwells on " Immortal Melody" by Sean Mc Shane
- "How they always manage to feel so soft and smell so sweetly, I'll never know, but bask in the glow. Good job and best wishes!"
Posted by dwells on "A Scroll Marked K" by Sean Mc Shane
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