Jade To Black
By Sean Mc Shane
Only a shadow of a broken dream
still whispering to an Angel's ghost
another comic book crucifixtion scheduled
though it's me They want the most
I find it amusing that you're here now
after the chaotic control you once
had then
all the realms of the mind lose their borders
it's just a matter of how and when
the laws of this world have failed me constant
on checkered board - Queen to Knight
attack
almost put back in the box for good
just close my heart and jade to
black
the old ' What-ifs' come to my fading focus
as new possibilities paw at a flickering
flame
I tried to capture the essence of a single one
but I couldn't recall my original
name
seeking asylum in my last state of grace
another dungeon so dark and dank
I've already offered my right hand apology
but there's no one left inside you
to thank
Author's Note:
Nothin' on Ms Lydia, she's way coolComments on "Jade To Black"
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On Friday, April 15, 2016, dwells
(4177) wrote:
That last state of grace...we are fortunate if we are allowed more than one or two, and beyond blessed for a third. So good to read you again Sean and the closing LH/RH business was striking once deciphered. Cheers my friend! - Dan
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On Monday, January 4, 2016, Lab Rat
(124) wrote:
This moved so haltingly well for me, almost like I expected it to snag somewhere, but it kept moving, like one foot infront of another. It was well crafted, and the imagery really set a stage. Well done! Thank you.