Today is Tomorrow, Yesterday is Just Ahead
By Sean Mc Shane
Today I will dive into the future's dream . . .
cut thru the currents, so irrelevant
as soon as it gets there, there I went
before the breakdown, of timeless age
I'll feel the spent spell of a lonely mage
the flow will maintain a steadier stop
until the obvious sinks to a forgotten top
Tomorrow, the Sun will meet the Moon for the first time again . . .
you'll know I haven't moved too far
coming full circle around a golden star
I'll hold your hand as night takes the dawn
the cosmic line we cross before it's been drawn
we'll be light years away on our way back
twilight shines in glory before the fade to black
You can count all your Yesterdays before your birth
Do you follow me here Love ?
just close my eyes while you look above
the Earth holds many secrets under Her sea
the never-could-be will always be for you and me
our existence has yet to take form
hear something new in the dreaded norm
Try not to lose what I said . . .
Today is tomorrow,
Yesterday is just ahead
Author's Note:
Are you confused ? Good. Now ya know what's goin' onComments on "Today is Tomorrow, Yesterday is Just Ahead"
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On Wednesday, October 16, 2013, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks everyone for all the cool comments, compliments and bookmark. That is very cool all the way. Thanks again. Later and til next time -
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On Tuesday, October 15, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Living in the past comes to mind, but then too that is the source of wisdom (or should be) - learning from our mistakes, or in this case maybe hoping for a do-over? Cheers Sean, well done!
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On Saturday, October 5, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...so cool, man. there will never be a day like Yesterday. gotta get back in time...
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On Thursday, October 3, 2013, Rebel tiGer King
(239) wrote:
Very nice, complexity and 180 degree turns in each thought. Good work - RTK
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A former member wrote:
I like the end where it says "yesterday is just ahead"
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On Thursday, October 3, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Sean when you got here i knew you were gonna rise fast. you stayed and stay under the radar. you are a poetic star. never did i imagine reading something so elegant and sensual yet ofcourse still manly.. i bow to you . much love ..
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On Thursday, October 3, 2013, Peyton1
(204) wrote:
Just......Damn!! You had me at to-yester-morrow-day! This is an awesome write. I imagine if there were a way to perfectly describe existence in a time rift....you just nailed it! The play on words intertwining past, present, and future as one time frame was mind boggling! And you made it look so easy. Hats off to you, MUCH enjoyed this work. Thanks for posting it.
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On Thursday, October 3, 2013, blue angel
(866) wrote:
you'll know I haven't moved too far coming full circle around a golden star.....stunner of a line... you've carved a beautiful cosmic romance... she stands gracefully among your stardust imagery... adorned by eyes of magic, perfectly confused, well done****