The Little Things

By Sean Mc Shane


Just the little things she says
the way she sees it all
there's always something so special
whenever I recall

They echo softly in my mind
like a cool song that wants to stay
and a love song as sweet as ours
well that's more than okay

something simple she said about her day
that still makes me chuckle and smile
and just like that cool love song
it goes on and on for quite awhile

Her written words I love to read
then I watch them bloom way out there
in a beautiful place beyond all dreams
a secret only we two can share

as blissfully enchanting as we know it to be
our mortal minds cannot remember
so the warmth in our hearts let us know
that our time was passionate and tender 

we don't really need to say it anymore
though we still do all the time
I guess because my heart holds hers
as her heart holds mine

and it would feel so awkward and wrong
to not say something that's so right
like, I'll see you on our cloud soon -
sleep well my love and nighty night

then as my smilin' eyes close on the day
my heart, my soul, and my mind sings
a sweet, elegant, cosmic medley
made up of all the little things . . .




 







 

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Copyright 2013 Sean Mc Shane
Published on Sunday, September 1, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Incase ya thought I forgot what Sundays are for Babydoll
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  • Peyton1 On Tuesday, October 8, 2013, Peyton1 (205)By person wrote:

    There's only one kind of love that feels like that! You capture it's essence so well with this soft side of your pen... Very much enjoy a good love story once in a while, the little things are important.........

  • FadedBlues On Monday, September 2, 2013, FadedBlues (2172)By person wrote:

    ...got to keep th lovelight burning, Sean...

  • Sean Mc Shane On Wednesday, September 4, 2013, Sean Mc Shane (615)By person wrote:

    Thanks FB, I try and keep it lit 24-7, even in the rain. Cool. Later -

  • blue angel On Monday, September 2, 2013, blue angel (877)By person wrote:

    Beautifully portrayed :)~ Nice to see your romantic side ~^_^~

  • Sean Mc Shane On Wednesday, September 4, 2013, Sean Mc Shane (615)By person wrote:

    Thanks BA, I actually exercise that side of me once in awhile. I'm glad ya like it. Sweet. Til next time -

  • ColorMeToxic On Sunday, September 1, 2013, ColorMeToxic (240)By person wrote:

    How beautiful, this piece. Stanza 6 just about made me cry! Thanks. Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Wednesday, September 4, 2013, Sean Mc Shane (615)By person wrote:

    Ey CMT, thanks for the sweet comment. And it's nice to see ya back in action. Cool. Til next time -

  • dwells On Sunday, September 1, 2013, dwells (4288)By person wrote:

    Sean you old softie! This was extravagantly evangelizing the female pulchritude that exudes control in all we say and do. Just keep it quiet lest they know the power they hold in delicate hands and iron wills, cheers lad!

  • Sean Mc Shane On Wednesday, September 4, 2013, Sean Mc Shane (615)By person wrote:

    Thanks d, I'll try and keep it quiet, but I talk in my sleep. But I will try. Cool. Later -


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