Feeling Numb

By Sean Mc Shane


My eyelids close, like . . .
          Iron doors descending slow
          grating against a rusted framework
          corroded sockets, spiral vision blurred
Now I see
          the connection to the abyss
          aerial incursions, thoughts collide
          collaborating, outrageously to the End

So in times of worthless reflection
          I close my eyes only to see a burned out sun
remembering the divinity of Mother Nature
          an influence, too uncompromising
          amusing ? Depends on the fading color
          or the scheme you're under

Look for symbolic shields

          " Protector of the modern myth
            I come before you
            bearing a world of nothing
            in exchange for something
            that means anything, anymore
            anything at all ? . . .  or not

Now in the loose summary
             of a story not yet complete
             there is an inch of dust and crust
             over the braille

I envy the blind even more
              for they can touch my words
              that I can no longer feel . . .              


          
           

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Copyright 2013 Sean Mc Shane
Published on Saturday, September 14, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Just a tornado lookin' for a trailer park
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  • blue angel On Sunday, September 15, 2013, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    Now this is poetry perfection, I'm capturing an ascension in the depth an seriousness here lately, very pleasing;)~ The ending is pure genius*

  • Sean Mc Shane On Tuesday, September 17, 2013, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    Thanks BA. I really apprechiate the high compliments. I'm glad ya like it, especially the ending. Very cool. Til next time -

  • dwells On Saturday, September 14, 2013, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    In the land of the blind, the man with one eye is king... Feeling numb is OK - just a precursor to feeling something else in the spectrum of feelings. I watched my poetry turn to shit, and knew it was time to make some changes. Meanwhile, fighting much of the same emotions, or lack of . When hard-earned respect has fled, anything goes in the backdraft to someplace else. Burning bridges and moving-on (now where did that come from?). Cheers Sean!

  • Sean Mc Shane On Tuesday, September 17, 2013, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    That is a really cool thing to say, d. It's nice to be able to vent emotions good or bad, in the form of poetry. Dark Poetry. Thanks again man. Later -


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