Feeling Numb
By Sean Mc Shane
My eyelids close, like . . .
Iron doors descending slow
grating against a rusted framework
corroded sockets, spiral vision blurred
Now I see
the connection to the abyss
aerial incursions, thoughts collide
collaborating, outrageously to the End
So in times of worthless reflection
I close my eyes only to see a burned out sun
remembering the divinity of Mother Nature
an influence, too uncompromising
amusing ? Depends on the fading color
or the scheme you're under
Look for symbolic shields
" Protector of the modern myth
I come before you
bearing a world of nothing
in exchange for something
that means anything, anymore
anything at all ? . . . or not
Now in the loose summary
of a story not yet complete
there is an inch of dust and crust
over the braille
I envy the blind even more
for they can touch my words
that I can no longer feel . . .
Author's Note:
Just a tornado lookin' for a trailer parkComments on " Feeling Numb"
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On Sunday, September 15, 2013, blue angel
(866) wrote:
Now this is poetry perfection, I'm capturing an ascension in the depth an seriousness here lately, very pleasing;)~ The ending is pure genius*
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On Tuesday, September 17, 2013, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks BA. I really apprechiate the high compliments. I'm glad ya like it, especially the ending. Very cool. Til next time -
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On Saturday, September 14, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
In the land of the blind, the man with one eye is king... Feeling numb is OK - just a precursor to feeling something else in the spectrum of feelings. I watched my poetry turn to shit, and knew it was time to make some changes. Meanwhile, fighting much of the same emotions, or lack of . When hard-earned respect has fled, anything goes in the backdraft to someplace else. Burning bridges and moving-on (now where did that come from?). Cheers Sean!
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On Tuesday, September 17, 2013, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
That is a really cool thing to say, d. It's nice to be able to vent emotions good or bad, in the form of poetry. Dark Poetry. Thanks again man. Later -