Immortal Melody
By Sean Mc Shane
On the plush green bank of the River Terreilly
that was where
She first smiled at me
Dressed in a flowing silken gown, deep
blue and pearl white
We sat by the fireside, holding hands thru-out
the night
Caring not of the time, nor how much we will yawn
when the sun rises to light the new dawn
but for now . .
.
the soft moss beneath Us, the silver moon high above
We embraced Our passions, and We shared Our love
After,
we placed gentle words within the soft music of Our heart
a song that
will never end, a song that never had a start
It will always
be, as It has always been
in this world and the next, we'll sing this
song again
Our Immortal Melody that has no name
flows
thru all realms and never remains the same
with so many unknown
worlds, together We live and We die
though We always find one another,
So We never say goodbye
Though Our bodies grow old, and fall
to sleep in death
We awake in a new life, filled with a new deep breath
to whisper more of Our words, into the Magic of Our Myth
for there
is no other loving Lass, I would ever share my lives with . . .
Author's Note:
When my mind plays music I've never heard before, I smile and say Her nameComments on " Immortal Melody"
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On Monday, March 18, 2013, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks Everyone for the awesome comments and sweet compliments. It's nice to write about the other side too. Thanks again, later and til next time -
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On Saturday, March 16, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Wow sean!! Damn!! This is absolutely beautiful and i am so happy for you .. much love and respect to you sir .. love you. i love this.
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On Thursday, March 14, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Masterfully wrought to tie it up in one neat package. The universal female maybe, marvelous and I too know her name, or used to, cheers!
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A former member wrote:
wow...simply beautiful..I love it
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On Thursday, March 14, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium
(273) wrote:
This is just lovely.
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On Wednesday, March 13, 2013, Nehema
(958) wrote:
I think you've become my new favorite romantic poet. This vibrates with the reality of your emotions and can easily be felt by the reader. What an earnest and sincere proclamation. perfectly beautiful - XXOO