Comments by TropicalSnowstorm
- "The nonlinear approach really set a mood effectively, the flashes of thoughts and pain and anger worked well to create the story’s unveiling. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "No Love" by JensGoneMad
- "Sorry I’m late to the party, great to see something new from you! Loved the way this flowed, you made the lines feel like they were breathed. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Look Forward" by Alanarchy
- "Still love this piece, and the lines "The rest of us, without a dream –
Exalt the curd; discard the cream..." seems to align especially well with much of the news over the past few weeks. "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Prelude to Slaughter IV" by dwells
- "Interesting piece, I like the way the images flash by and your point of view comes across as a disconnected observer. Very much how surreal a funeral can feel. Great job! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Endless Loop" by JustAnEarlyBird
- "I liked this one very much, the notion of impending oblivion while the universe shrugs in indifference... gaze into this mirror, you will live or die quite independent of the number of likes and retweets. With the next upgrade to html, no one will even be able to find evidence of them again. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Harvest Moon" by dwells
- "This piece had the sense of the profound hanging about it. I particularly loved the line, “I’m only flient in actions†- always a treat to see something new from you. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "~741 Hz~" by soul_versing
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