Comments by TropicalSnowstorm
- "There are so many quotable lines in this piece, but I think my favorite is, "i think i dreamed you
once long ago
but i don't remember." Great piece! Ciao, Steve "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Taylor on Probabtion" by Jonas
- "I love the imagery and flow of this piece. I enjoyed reading it when you first posted it, but I had nothing worthy to say by way of comment... Well, I find I am still lacking, so I will just go ahead and tell you that I loved it and leave it at that... :) "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "universe" by Jonas
- "Well done! Especially impressive you got it in one take. Great to see/hear something new from you! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "agoraphobia " by Jonas
- "Interesting observations of depth in a setting attainable to anyone. Pop culture Buddhism practiced in sight of an airport...deep lessons learned through interaction with flies. Your intuition and well wishes did not make them bees, but an adventure doesn't really require us to exactly achieve what we set out to do, does it? We deal with what lands on us, we use the mechanisms we have based on what we know, and we emerge. We can either emerge swinging at flies, or smiling to ourselves sheepishly after enjoying the warmth of the sun and the cool of the breeze. Reading this, my smile was more than internal. Glad to see something new! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "A Meditation" by Jonas
- "What is (im)possible is indeed hidden behind unmoving eyes with no intent... Dreams must be seized from the abyss...they will not catch themselves! Your words have been missed, and I happily see I have another two to read. I'm off! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Catfish" by Jonas
- ""read about what happened in the next day's paper
though i was not quite certain i was sure enough to feel terribly guilty" - I loved this one! Definitely produced a smile. Ciao, Steve"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "an unlikely story" by Jonas
- "You have done it again, great piece! I especially liked the imagery of "we dig in the dirt like kids looking for china
and anytime something shines in the mud we're convinced
that it's meaningful". Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "a model on a billboard" by Jonas
- ""i can't honestly say i'm not lying to
myself for my own selfish need
for beautifully imaculate visions of the past and
the illusion of validation" - those are indeed fantastic lines. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "untitled" by Jonas
- ""the only reason we aren't is because we've forgotten
and it wasn't another time because there is only one time" - I love the machinations of your mind! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "beat" by Jonas
- "The only variable in the equation is ourselves and how we will adjust ourselves (or not) to fit into the process... Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "glimmer" by Jonas
- "The fire in us is fed by a sense of injustice and entitlement and, whatever else, but, in the end, the fire is just a rebellion against the way things are and the way they will, by all evidence, always be. "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "glimmer" by Jonas
- ""then why waste time asking
why
these things are the way they are"...I feel you there...things are as they are the world over. The only variable under our control is ourselves... "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "glimmer" by Jonas
- ""to touch the spire
of apathy" - I feel that very much right now... I wish I could care...but right now I can't muster the empathy required. This had a great, funky feel to it. Good to see your thoughts again. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "tachycardia(lyrics adapted from poem)" by Jonas
- "the simple beauty with...would be the ones that would, in fact, prevent me from discovering it in the first place by their presence... I enjoyed this very much."
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "to wander" by Jonas
- "loneliness...because it whispers to me that we are always, at the essence of our existence, alone... The same people I wish could be there to share "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "to wander" by Jonas
- "Beauty can be found in such simple places and ways...and the beauty like you describe, that I have only ever observed when alone, does at the same time for me seem to reveal "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "to wander" by Jonas
- "amused by our discomfort with acknowledging his presence. Sigh...I need another vodka drink and maybe I'll throw in an action flick that tells me if I am just focused enough, I can beat the odds... Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "seventeen years" by Jonas
- "The difficult truth is always lurking outside like a voyeur to peer through the window of our carefully constructed, beautiful home of self denial...and all we can do is pretend we didn't see him there...leering and touching himself..."
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "seventeen years" by Jonas
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