out of clotting factors

By Jonas

and i've found a new fire in myself
as the doubt melts away
i feel thin like wire
as current alternates through me

and this isn't a sound foundation
but don't touch me
i'm ready to kill

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© 2005 Jonas
Published on Thursday, November 3, 2005.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • diavolessa On Friday, November 18, 2005, diavolessa (207)By person wrote:

    greatly written, wonderfully concluded.

  • manywalks On Monday, November 7, 2005, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    Hmmmm, this was tasty. ~ wen

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, November 7, 2005, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    I like the feel of this one very much. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Like a charged breath of new air, this poem is electric, a climatic conclusion. Scholar

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