my druthers

By Jonas

And if this
Our great love
Can crumble into dust

Then anything can
And must

And so my understanding of death
Improves significantly

And I would rather it hadn't

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Copyright 2015 Jonas
Published on Sunday, January 11, 2015.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • KittyStryker On Thursday, April 30, 2015, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    This is so heartbreakingly familiar. Oh, the pain of learning more about life!

  • Six-Out On Friday, April 3, 2015, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Crushing. The realization that anything is fragile hurts so bad.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, January 12, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    That is the one understanding none of us really wants to gain. Thought provoking. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • A former member wrote: This is an ever dreaded piece of art. Nicely written. Scholar

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