Comments by lupus tenebrae
- "Haha "Hasta la vista, baby", poor Mary, now all she has is her little lamb. I'm glad I did read between the lines, doing so cheered me up. I guess that's why we right poetry in privacy, for self-pleasure ;). Write onward my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Read Between The Lines" by Malcholm Dark
- "Such tragedy, and it happens all too often. I for one can attest to the father being neglectful. My dad always kept a gun in his dresser, but luckily I knew enough not to play with it. Some are not so lucky, and you're rage is completely understandable. Write onward."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Why Mommy" by Malcholm Dark
- "Mind breaking and brilliant all the same, spinning around in circles never felt so good. The nun bit was classic, and overall a well written piece. Paradoxical logic just makes me all ones and zeroes. Write onward my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Life In Paradox City" by Malcholm Dark
- "An acrostic tribute to the hate beast, nicely done. Always feeding and always hungry for more. Another fine piece, write on my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The Hater" by Malcholm Dark
- "Reminds me of the time I saw a deer get absolutely obliterated, just a cloud of fur left where it was standing. I'm repulsed and fascinated by this all the same, much like a graphic car accident. Perfect tribute to the national pastime of West Virginia haha. Write on my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "ad nauseam--The road-kill-Frisbee ballad" by Malcholm Dark
- "Some people keep skeletons in their closet, yet you keep them in the freezer lol. I doubt this will catch on with Ben & Jerry's. Still a fine macabre piece, to beat the heat with a morbid treat, write on. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "I Love You More Than Ice Cream" by Malcholm Dark
- "A tragedy that made the cold vacuum of space, look even darker. Their names are immortalized, for the sacrifices made in the name of science. Very meaningful tribute, write on. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "They Fell From The Sky" by Malcholm Dark
- "Quite a graphic abusive tale. What happens behind closed doors defies reality and fantasy alike. He got what he deserved at the end at least, haunted by the specter of his late lover. And the author's note brings up a good point. The difference between bad abuse, and kinky abuse lol. Write onward."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The Damaged Rose (aces over eights)" by Malcholm Dark
- "My inner puppet cries out for it's own freedom after reading this. With strongest twine, we are bound, broken splinters, on the ground. Nicely written again my friend, thanks for sharing."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Let Me Fall" by Malcholm Dark
- "Haha I don't think anyone would want to be that zoo keeper, at least without a cattle prod. I've seen mosh pits less dangerous than the crowd Bieber rounds up. It's one of those things that's funny, because it's true. Write on my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Zoo Keeper Needed" by Malcholm Dark
- "I truly sympathize with your loss, I still think about my cat and my dog. Every time I feel something on my leg, I think it's them brushing up against me, and I'm disappointed each time I look down. Remember him fondly, and cherish the memories like gold."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Goodbye Old Friend" by Malcholm Dark
- "Nicely said, some rule the roost, and others are chicken feed unfortunately. Abuse is a one-sided cockfight, some chickens cross the road, and others are scrambled. Ok I'll stop now. In all seriousness, wonderful piece. Write on my friend.
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Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Mister Hen Pecked" by Malcholm Dark
- "Ah Custer's Last Stand, one of my favorite moments in history. The thunder, lightning, rain, clouds, and the wolves. Such vivid descriptions, truly felt like an ancient power was amassing itself for battle. Write on my friend. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "People Of The Sun Dance" by Malcholm Dark
- "An oil stained rainbow, a grim and beautiful image. The symbol of innocence, smudged, and darkened. You never cease to impress, write onward. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Dead Rainbows" by Malcholm Dark
- "It's a mixed message this world sends. Everyone says follow your dreams, yet those dreams travel a rocky path. We follow them anyway, with blistered feet and fleeting resolve. Why? Perhaps just to be told it was worth it in the end, or maybe we actually believe something is there waiting. I'll stop rambling now, nicely written piece, for all the aspiring dreamers out there.
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Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Dreamers And Dreams" by Malcholm Dark
- "The part when the hippie walks into The Mother Load was a lot like that scene from PeeWee's Big Adventure, at least he didn't start dancing. I was held captive by this story, it's such a heart warming sight, hippies and hicks coexisting lol. You always know how to lighten the mood, thanks."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Hippie Beads And Cowbell Dreams" by Malcholm Dark
- "Had they made Misery completely faithful to the book, it might have been too graphic for the general viewing public lol. Of course I wouldn't have minded much."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Once More" by Malcholm Dark
- "The lives of the wicked shall fear the night, so long as vengeance stalks behind them. Had a Kill Bill vibe to it. A dangerous huntress prowling the shadows, waiting, lurking. Write on my friend. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Prey For The Hunter" by Malcholm Dark
- "I imagined observing the police questioning a killer, at first he's silent, then with a twisted grin he spills every gruesome detail. The evil seeping from every remorseless word, really presented some chilling thoughts. Write on."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "2 To Remember Me By" by Malcholm Dark
- "IT, the reason every child hated clowns. It seems like just yesterday I saw that paper sail boat flowing into the storm drain. Nicely written my friend, and remember, "we all float down here.""
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Once More" by Malcholm Dark
- "Such intriguing thoughts, needles in haystacks, travel plans for lemmings, inkblots. Wrangling coconuts in the shadows of your mind, like wandering thoughts searching for answers? Write on."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Trapped" by Malcholm Dark
- "I really liked the space and sci-fi mixture. You want her to be cut in half by a lightsaber and to be eaten by Venusian blood worms? Guess that's good old fashioned space karma for stealing your cat lol. Write on."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Missing Her" by Malcholm Dark
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