Comments by Narcissa
- "Its good to see you post again...and though this piece is so personal it sticks to my bones cause I carried it around with me all day yesterday when I first read it..."
Posted by Narcissa on "A Confession in Bright Dark." by Aleas
- "great piece...it seemed to sprout legs and walk around inside my brain... the combo of the flow and the meaning was perfect!"
Posted by Narcissa on "Mind and Matter" by Huey Lewis
- "Btw...I think this is one of my fav pieces of yours...ache writes each line and sadness separates them...I know this isn't what you aim to write but believe me when I say to you love never dies...from day to day than year to year it can haunt your deepest fear and soothe your greatest pain...you know where that stems from and after 15+ years I have gone on and he still resides in me...but going on is vital and happiness is still achievable...regardless...."
Posted by Narcissa on "Stardeath" by Echoes of Orpheus
- "...I'd hate to hear that you thought this wasn't a good poem b/c it is...as always...your pieces grow stronger with each new write...and as always.... a pleasure to read :)"
Posted by Narcissa on "The Illusionist" by Echoes of Orpheus
- "I'm transported into a fairy realm...even with the sadness...my heart is still light and forever reaching for those toadstools...this made me smile...."
Posted by Narcissa on "Midnight Garden" by Leith Plunkett
- "Death made beautiful...I always find myself reading your pieces a few times to get the full picture of the metaphors...and every time I read them I fall deeply in love with your work...This piece especially...loved it. "
Posted by Narcissa on "Open Casket " by Mylissa
- "Thanks everyone...quite the shock for me since there were so many great pieces...Thanks Stephen for letting me step into your piece and add a bit of me...I still love this!"
Posted by Narcissa on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas
- "No Dylan it is I who thank you...all of your heart laid on the chopping block for us to read...It has been a long time since Ive done that and Im not sure that I could...again...*hugs back*..."
Posted by Narcissa on "The Thing About Guilt." by Echoes of Orpheus
- "The thing about guilt and regret is that we learn or perhaps are shaped by it. Ive had my share but I believe everything happens for a reason...good or bad...and regrets shouldn't hold us just mold us for our next step... ok enough of my 2 cents that doesn't add up to much...Who hasn't known this? yet I believe no one could express it as perfect as you do..."
Posted by Narcissa on "The Thing About Guilt." by Echoes of Orpheus
- "First...I hate to hear that about any place of nature being torn down...I myself reside among the trees and mountains...Where the closest mcdonalds is 30 miles away...anyway My heart goes out to you and your home. Second I love the rhythm and rhyme of the piece. It made it magical. "
Posted by Narcissa on "Home ... Or what was Home" by Mithiras
- ""The stars aren't missed they just remind me of past poems"...what can I say? I know this and yet I can't help but think that love is different in each person we choose to love...when a piece of ourselves will always belong to one...there is always more of us to give...what else are we living for? This just made me think...you know...and to never open my heart again, to never embrace love...thats just wrong. This piece...another Id fav...hit me square in the heart...and it hurts. These are just my thoughts. my views. I know yours...and I hope all is well..."
Posted by Narcissa on "New Age Romantic." by Echoes of Orpheus
- "Your posts seem to be fewer but each one stronger...Not only sould I feel this but I saw it play above my head...the sad angel dangling his feet over the edge...missing. longing. denying an eternity w/o his mate...ahhh how I miss your words...your visions when your posts are spread apart...and yet its like candy when I can read one. Id fav this if I had room...I will be reading this one time and time again. "
Posted by Narcissa on "When Heaven's Not Enough" by Echoes of Orpheus
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