Comments by LOKI
- "It does have an overwelming wisdom to it.Some one called me a young old man once.I would say you fit the mold better than I do after reading this.Searching every where for beauty except with in herself.Loved the story and the way yo conveyed it.NICE"
Posted by LOKI on "Metamorphosis" by Alchemist
- "L ike this because I believe in being who you are no mateter what anyone thinks.For lack of a better phrase fuck em.Better to be hated for who you are than loved for who your not
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Posted by LOKI on "Who i am" by LostInDarkness
- "This is really clever.Its a rise and fall of emotions.Its Happy sad mad angry even funny.Really liked the chunky sluts line.It made me laugh.I gonna fave this one"
Posted by LOKI on "Disgustingly Beautiful" by Alchemist
- "Damn Slo you have a very perceptive way of writing.Very raw.Alot of emotion.But written flawlessly.Nice
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Posted by LOKI on "Irretastable" by sIo
- "excelent write.I can definitly relate to this.The south is beautiful in the summer.By the way is the humidity in South Carolina as bad as it is in Tennessee"
Posted by LOKI on "Southern Summers" by Alchemist
- "Damn you have a way to portray raw emotions with words.I really enjoyed this.Its raw its truthful.No holding back.Awsome."
Posted by LOKI on "Don't Bless" by Alchemist
- "man you were right.Im glad I read this.You portray the power of addiction very well and very unique.Very nice write."
Posted by LOKI on "Addiction" by Alchemist
- "Words of hope spoken beutifully.Keep on keepin on.Thats all you can do.Nice write"
Posted by LOKI on "Simple wish" by openureyes
- "Nothing in this life is ever easy.And sometimes our worst enemies are ourselves.You are beautiful dear.And this was a beautiful write."
Posted by LOKI on "A Brighter View of Me" by openureyes
- "What a beautiful piece of poetry.Pure emotion no holding nothing back.And I can relate to this so well.Excellent write.And ur pretty cute urself.:)"
Posted by LOKI on "What defines me" by openureyes
- "Ive turned to the bottle to erase painful memories.It works for a minute.But good write.I can relate to it well."
Posted by LOKI on "New Castle" by DowngradeBeauty
- "This is sad.But I agree with Mylissa.It is pure emotion conveyed ever so beautifully.Nice write"
Posted by LOKI on "Pink Satin" by Tania
- "ah,The things we do that we cant change and how they haunt us so.Very nice write.You definitly have talent."
Posted by LOKI on ".... Sorry" by Tania
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