.... Sorry

By Tania

Looking back its hard to remember..
Why I used each of your broken falls,
As stepping stones to heal my own wounds.
Relentless and hollow I pressed
Watching each bruise appear on your perfect skin
The skin I so desperately wanted to be in..
But I kept watching
As your heavy heart was overloaded in dead blood
Forcing through you.. gradually fracturing
every pure bone you endowed
Breaking you…
Because that is what I wanted.
Spite blinded me into believing so..
You were too flawless
luminous even in the dark
And I had to change that.
I had to taint you the way that I had been..
A crestfallen angel who still carries the scars.
And I don’t blame you for not forgiving me
Because I have never forgiven myself
And just so you know…
I never will.

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Published on Saturday, February 24, 2007. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on ".... Sorry"

On Monday, May 14, 2007, Eric (77) wrote:

Wonderfully written! Love this.
A former member wrote: What can I say, I am simply speechless. I love the way you weive so much emotion behind your words. You truly are a one of a kind poet. Your like pringles. Once I pop, I just can't stop.
On Monday, March 5, 2007, Disassembly Boy (59) wrote:

wow. beautiful and powerful. loved it.
On Thursday, March 1, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (93) wrote:

This is fantastic.I absolutely loved the first 3 lines.~Elana
On Tuesday, February 27, 2007, Bella Butchery (696) wrote:

.... you make me want to bleed art, open old wounds and rip out muscle tissue memories, burn them and rub the ashes onto paper, just so i can write like this
On Wednesday, February 28, 2007, Tania (192) wrote:

Thank you cloud. you are an inspiration to all x
On Tuesday, February 27, 2007, prettydisgrace (93) wrote:

Beautiful... heartbreaking.
On Tuesday, February 27, 2007, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

There not much I can add to everyone else's comments apart from this was fantastic. Honest, great choice of words and excellent flow and form - Top draw stuff!
A former member wrote: this was very good. it echoes parts of my own past.the ending was superb..very final
On Monday, February 26, 2007, The Shattered Heart (30) wrote:

Wow....good write. (( And thanks for the comment on RANDOMOSITY! ))
A former member wrote: this has to be my fav poem from you. i loved this. nice write. ~ red.
A former member wrote: "A crestfallen angel who still carries the scars." Goodness...sorry is one of those words that is hardest to drop from our tongues...the imagery in this is excellent, the emotion raw and intense. ~*Beth*~
A former member wrote: Sometimes sorry is so hard to say. The emotion in this was great. Well done
On Saturday, February 24, 2007, CharlottesWeb (509) wrote:

I would never forgive. This poem hits close, like a little look into the thoughts of someone who would do this to you...and I can't nor would I try to find forgiveness. This is a great poem, absolutely wonderful in fact.
On Saturday, February 24, 2007, Mylissa (825) wrote:

your tone is so crushing, a beautiful display of poetry. wonderful.
On Saturday, February 24, 2007, LOKI (161) wrote:

ah,The things we do that we cant change and how they haunt us so.Very nice write.You definitly have talent.