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Pink Satin
By Tania
I lay in your bed of lies every night
bare in-between satin sheets
knowing the only thing covering me whole is
..fabricated truths..
nightmares swathed delicately beneath laced covers
crushed thoughts silky smooth linger over me like torn-lovers
These sheets that so thinly draw the line amid love and hate
..yet..
Hold us together. So strong.
Hold me together. So fragile.
Cushioning my falls as I wake from my dreams
only to lull me back tenderly..
Just so i can fall all over again..
I lay wrapped in my pink satin
That lays shrouded in tears and feint black lace..
My pink satin.
And I know it will never be silk...
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© 2007 Tania
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On Sunday, June 10, 2007, Six-Out
(1435)
wrote:
mm. This tasted despondant. I liked it.
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On Sunday, June 10, 2007, Tania
(197) wrote:
Thanks jon =)
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On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
I just came on..because she's on...Hmm...wonder if one can attribute personality traits by their bedding selection? Warm and fuzzy I am, as flannel my favorite? Then in summer...just hot and naked?
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A former member wrote:
I believe she got so much commentary because she is hot. LoL There is maybe 4 or 5 girls on this. LoL Either way I enjoyed the silky feel to this :-D thehe ][ ][
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On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, Tania
(197) wrote:
HEY!!! Theres SEVEN girls, 8 including aunty acutally!! meh!;P
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A former member wrote:
LoL, Aww.. A little offensive are we. I enjoyed the poem and I was just playing. ][ ][
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On Sunday, March 18, 2007, jack paper
(126) wrote:
i am happy to see another post from you. This is softly sorrowful and beautifully sad.. well done Tania.
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On Monday, March 12, 2007, Disassembly Boy
(61) wrote:
I enjoyed this.. every word was beautiful. I especially enjoyed the first line.
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A former member wrote:
maybe satin's stronger that silk? no? love the provocative conclusion, the way you imbue the fabrics with transcendent meaning... and the colors, too, evolve into symbols of what the reader perceives... nice work!
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A former member wrote:
*than* oooppssss
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A former member wrote:
aww such a beautiful poem. i loved it. ~ saddened.
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On Saturday, March 10, 2007, Tania
(197) wrote:
Grrr.. u better! ;)
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On Friday, March 9, 2007, Mistress Shadow
(252) wrote:
Very beautiful. I hope you don't settle for satin. ~T
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On Friday, March 9, 2007, Mistress Shadow
(252) wrote:
..unless of course it's satin rope and scarves..
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A former member wrote:
one of the writes here that leave me wanting to say something... but I'd tarnish it, so I was here, I read, I enjoyed... thank you
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On Friday, March 9, 2007, LOKI
(164) wrote:
This is sad.But I agree with Mylissa.It is pure emotion conveyed ever so beautifully.Nice write
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On Friday, March 9, 2007, prettydisgrace
(96) wrote:
i was crushed...thanx
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On Friday, March 9, 2007, Tania
(197) wrote:
PSST.. (you already commented)
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A former member wrote:
What a beautifully crushing ending. This was great, loved it!
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A former member wrote:
you are amazing,Tania. the last 2 lines are stuck in my head
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, BeautifullyRuined
(94) wrote:
This is beautiful.The ending crushed me.
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
This is exactly what is beautiful and crushing wrapping words into a song. You are pure expression, remarkable.
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, prettydisgrace
(96) wrote:
Lovely Tania... beautiful :)
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
pink satin, reminds me of a dream i had when i was 18, it was so vivid that i can still remember... but it had alot to do with what you are talking aobut here. intertwined lovers, grasping figments and vapor, looking
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
for a shred of happieness. sometimes we fail, sometimes we actually accomplish something, but regardless, im happy you got rid of the 'these's', have more faith in your writing kiddo, you are a stunner :)
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, Tania
(197) wrote:
*hugs cloud* :)
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