Comments by veingo
- "A tear for every hrain of sand on the beach... This has the beauty of the comming tide, and the heart break of a sand castle lost. I always enjoy your posts... ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "captivity" by Lylani
- "Oh wow! The steel indifferance in this really sums up the anger; which really sums up the pain. Not so much like the writes you usually post, but surely worth reading, and reading into. Well done, lady... ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "One year on" by Lylani
- "Damn. You have been to that place aswell... And you've made me remember it all too well.. It's good to hear of you again... ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Petroleum Tears" by Lylani
- "The staggered rythem of this really drives home the feeling of thoughts and emotions coming from every angle; being stifled by sheer will. It's like trying to fight hornets with your fists... Gaah.. I never feel like my comments do your words justice... But I somehow ALWAYS feel your words... ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "No Paper Flowers" by Lylani
- "This is more beautiful than any comment I could leave would be worthy of.. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Know" by Lylani
- "You should live in Ohio, so I could bring you flowers, and take you out for dinner... Again you give perfect discription of emotion in script. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Lies" by Lylani
- "Oh to be so lucky, as your muse. Another beautiful work. You never dissapoint. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Selfless" by Lylani
- "Your works have capivated me from the time you arived here. So glad to have you around. You have a magical way of making me feel each line as if I had been there myself. Perhaps because I have lived through very similar moments. But you weave a certain beauty into the heartbreak that I never could. Lovely as always Miss L.. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Speeding Cars" by Lylani
- "Oh the contrast of feelings, in your 2 latest. A spiral of emotion that took me for a ride. I so look forward to your every post. ^V^
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Posted by veingo on "I am strength" by Lylani
- "You put the word "from" in twice, in the third stanza. As for real opinions; this was sorrowful, yet beautiful. A bit unsettling, and still comfortable at the same time. You always ballance the different ends of emotion so well in your writes. Thanks for sharing. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Comes the end" by Lylani
- "Again you prove so very impressive.. This is what makes me laugh at those who claim they don't belive in love.. Love never goes away; it's the "happily ever after" that one shouldn't belive in.. "undeniable unsustainable", What a perfectly painfull way to say it... ^v^"
Posted by veingo on "'Hi' should just mean 'Hello'" by Lylani
- "I fell in love with my best friend once. And I fear I'll love her still, when long in the grave. And thought I told her every day, she'll never understand. Not really. I have the same first reaction to all your posts...."She says it so well" ....^V^"
Posted by veingo on "It Was In Your Pocket All Along" by Lylani
- "This was worded perfectly. I know it because I have felt it. They say that for each of us there is one "perfect love", but I've seen it proven far more often, that for each of us there is a "nemesis love". Such memories... I feel for each of us. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Why I stole your heart" by Lylani
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