Comments by All Members
- "I think everybody has faced these demons off and on in life but to know you are not the only one makes you know there is hope. great write keep it up"
Posted by Unknown on "This Cliff (or final days)" by cre
- "i have asked myself the same question, before. i will never know the answer until it happens. beautiful post and imagery (: "
Posted by Star on "Will I Ever" by cre
- "as melancholy blue gives way to sunkissed hues
and dappled drops of light sift softly into view.. beautiful . beautiful.."
Posted by Devilish on "Will I Ever" by cre
- "I once read somewhere of the string theory. that the world is all connected to each other by strings. once you sever one it has a rippling effect. vibrating to the rest of the strings and those strings are changed forever. I love this poem. great write."
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "Casualties" by cre
- "It's sad that people kill for reasons unknown, not knowing that there are other people who are affected by their acts."
Posted by Unknown on "Casualties" by cre
- "Yes, life makes little sense sometimes! Some religions would have us believe that this life is only a small part of 'gods' plan for us. The bad bastards will get theirs in the next chapter . What utter bull shit! The structure of this was amazing and song like! Splendid stuff! "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Casualties" by cre
- "I have read this several times and I'm sure I'll read it many more. I can relate..but more than that I think you beautifully expressed yourself. Your peace will come. "
Posted by MorganaRose on "Will I Ever" by cre
- "This left me speechless and in awe. It's absolutely brilliant!"
Posted by MorganaRose on "Blue" by cre
- "Wow...always wow no matter how many times read you are genius. You write because.you know and for that I am both glad for the relation and sad for.your suffering"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Is This Life" by cre
- "Need to add punctuation to accentuate the words. Otherwise, I liked the imagery your words projected and conveyed your message well."
Posted by Unknown on "Every Sky In My Mind" by cre
- "Your poem needs some punctuation to accentuate the words. Some words did not exactly rhyme ("...a few forsaken leaves" and "...receptacle of grief", possible alternative "..receptacle for one who grieves!"). Having said that, I did like the journey to the deep, thought-proking and emotional message. Good job!"
Posted by Unknown on "The Old House: The Beginning" by cre
- "This poem represents one of the qualities of poetry that I like, which is to be thought provoking. Sometimes poems are a bit of a conundrum, in that you are examining words to determine the deeper meaning of the author. Sometimes the effort is rewarded as the true meaning reveals itself, but sometimes it remains a bit of a mystery and continues to rack the brain. In the former the author conveys their message and in the later the message is lost. This poet travels a bit of a winding trail but ends with a reveal of the deeper message."
Posted by Unknown on "Funeral: The Quiet Of Real" by cre
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