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"This is simply magnificent!!!"
Posted by SulaMoon on "Empty fears" by nightshade

"Oh to be a young child again...how nice that would be. Something I often find myself thinking about. Nice write, shade. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "Times gone by" by nightshade

"haha you might need that snakebite kit sitting beside the snake you just put your hand on."
Posted by nightshade on "triple headed octopus" by nightshade

"this sounds like you're trying to craft a work with a particular metre...hmmm...perhaps for a certain contest...consult the sage...edit,edit...but that's just me... :)...am I close?"
Posted by kinkifrog on "triple headed octopus" by nightshade

"i find this funny but theres and undertone to it that i cant explain other than unease well done the words just flow and intertwine with each other to make it have a nice rhythm to it."
Posted by Unknown on "triple headed octopus" by nightshade

"I'm breathless after this. WOW. Just WOW. the passion and lust bounced off the page. I love it! -mars"
Posted by Mars on "Boys kissing boys" by nightshade

"OMG! This poem to me is THE greatest poem on DarkPoetry! It has so much raw emotion. Your style is so unique and captivating. You have gain a fan for life here. Your talent is truly unrivaled. I'm so awstruck. Truly outstanding. Please write some more for I really hope to see work from you in the future. Outstanding! WOW!"
Posted by Unknown on "Recollected Disillusions With Natalie and Model32" by nightshade

"The Words Felt Like Dragging A Coffin Thru A Smokey Bog. And I Liked It."
Posted by Chaos God on "Formaldehyde Dreams" by nightshade

"Your pen is surely made of whispers to the nape of the neck.I imagine your touch is like that of...ghosts.Beautiful,woman.Just beautiful."
Posted by Honey on "Boys kissing boys" by nightshade

"Great, but the rhyme scheme threw me off... The intention was awesome, and the emotion was clear enough, but the structure with the words doesn;t feel natural."
Posted by Unknown on "Formaldehyde Dreams" by nightshade

"Love your rhymes. They mesmerise."
Posted by tindomerel on "Dashed Hopes" by nightshade

"Like a soft touch of breeze before the storm. Delicate flow and content."
Posted by tindomerel on "Crimson soul" by nightshade

"I like the imagery and ambience of this poem. It captures the reader's attention till the end. Fine work."
Posted by tindomerel on "Times gone by" by nightshade

":::Deep Breath::: Read 2x. I can't think of anything original to say...but wanted to leave you a note letting you know I read...and I enjoyed...and I think it's a great piece."
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Boys kissing boys" by nightshade

"morose but beautiful thoughts from such wonderful minds *forehead kisses* to you all ..... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5mfyCI82lWM"
Posted by Corinthian on "Recollected Disillusions With Natalie and Model32" by nightshade

"an epic tale of a slow twisting inward... preparation for a lashing out. Well done, a smooth assimilation..... i liked the line.... only in dreams do the blind dare to dream. Kudos to each and all!"
Posted by Unknown on "Recollected Disillusions With Natalie and Model32" by nightshade

"good job you guys flows very well, great narrative :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Recollected Disillusions With Natalie and Model32" by nightshade

"so well done...I can't imagine the process...seamless...take a bow you three and thanks for sharing :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Recollected Disillusions With Natalie and Model32" by nightshade

"Excellently written. Realm is right, it sounds as if one person had written this. Thanks for all the hard work and for sharing this piece."
Posted by Unknown on "Recollected Disillusions With Natalie and Model32" by nightshade

"wow hahaha I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. It's so amazing when I saw how well you three blended this poem together. I honestly would have believed it was written by one person if I didn't read the title hahaha good work guys!"
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "Recollected Disillusions With Natalie and Model32" by nightshade

"Were it not for the fact that the title relays the message of homosexuality loud and clear, I would have found myself lunging for a box of kleenex and a bottle of jergins about halfway through this impecable piece of art. (haha..kidding) amazing work shade, as always."
Posted by Asylum on "Boys kissing boys" by nightshade

"awesome nightshade. im glad u posted some new poems, been wondering if u had given up or something"
Posted by Unknown on "Empty fears" by nightshade

"I love what you've done with Cupid here, shademan :) The image in the first stanza is simply to die for haha... I would suggest that there may be a couple typos... like a verb disagreement with "caress" and "breath" rather than "breathe." Not sure I'm a fan of the double lost area.... and "film" didn't aid the erotic imagery, for me.... but I do like the notion of the underwater burial... I wonder if that couldn't be powerful... a dreamy piece, indeed. well penned, my friend."
Posted by Unknown on "Boys kissing boys" by nightshade

"Well it's good...I give you that."
Posted by man of decay on "Boys kissing boys" by nightshade

"This is beautiful, so pure. I much enjoyed a positive read for a change. Thank you for sharing:)"
Posted by River Lily on "Chasing Pavement" by nightshade

":) not bad shademan....good visuals hhaa. umm fix foreign..u mispelt it."
Posted by natalie on "Boys kissing boys" by nightshade

"hot damn..... but I'm married now :)) well written my friend!! ~ hdb."
Posted by Unknown on "Boys kissing boys" by nightshade

"I agree with U, well written.... still something 's not right here unless there's a comical twist to it... but I guess that's just me... write on"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Boys kissing boys" by nightshade

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