triple headed octopus

By nightshade

eight arms; eight beats, easy to defeat
three heads speak a syllable divineĀ 
not enough time to meet the deadline
combine the rhyme and make it complete

a bookmark placed upon this page
until I sit and confer with muse and sage
the words placed here shall surely change
twisted and turned to become deranged

ten or twelve sets of four
shall turn into something nevermore
now lets see who gets these lines
which I pour from my mind.

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Copyright 2011 nightshade
Published on Sunday, January 9, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

There is another meaning behind the words. If you get it then be sure keep an eye on this one.
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  • FadedBlues On Thursday, January 19, 2012, FadedBlues (2168)By person wrote:

    nightshade, thanks for your advice, I'll check out your lists...

  • A former member wrote: Your writing flows well and keeps my attention but leaves me wondering after my eyes have scanned every last word. A sense of mystery emits from your poem. I want to know more.

  • A former member wrote: i find this funny but theres and undertone to it that i cant explain other than unease well done the words just flow and intertwine with each other to make it have a nice rhythm to it.


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