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Boys kissing boys
By nightshade
Peach fuzz upon angelic cheekbones
Fingers stroke from lipÂ
to chin
Close your eyesÂ
as yourÂ
lips part
and my breath
is inhaled into
your lungs
and my
tongue
caresses
the cupid's bow
from which your
tongue
shoots out like a deadly
arrow of love
causing me to feelÂ
an instant high from your
sweet salty skin
as your electric touch
travels from your
fingertips down my spine
lips and eyes locked for
what seems an eternity
as I lose myself in your soul and
am carried away by
your warm
sultry breath
 brings foreign words
across my hearing
as I am lost
in your smell
again I feel lost and
therefore
increase
the passion
the pressure
the lust
as IÂ press my lips to
your neck
and wander down your muscular chest
to your tightened absÂ
and then I go a bit
furtherÂ
deeperÂ
before IÂ
come up
as if I am trying to break
that film
between
an underwater burial
and crisp fresh air
just to lose myself again
in your eyes
your lips
your skin
your kiss
Â
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Copyright 2010 nightshade
Author's Note:
I must thank one Spikedwithlust for talking me into and making me want to write this piece. Thanks, Lusty :pComments on "Boys kissing boys"
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On Wednesday, June 24, 2020, carlosjackal
(3016)
wrote:
And Thank Nae she did! Brilliant work of art here.
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A former member wrote:
Very...delicious lol
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A former member wrote:
I felt like I was there watching the both of you, and now I need a goddamn drink. Thank you, baby.
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On Wednesday, October 12, 2016, Star
(919) wrote:
*fans herself off* that...that was most definitely enjoyed.
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On Monday, October 3, 2016, 10 Forty Three
(593) wrote:
I enjoyed this very much. Well done, nightshade. - 10:43
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On Sunday, July 10, 2011, Nameless Pariah
(126) wrote:
That was so hot. ;)
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On Thursday, June 30, 2011, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
This gave me something to ride to! What I was riding doesnt want me to tell! Lovely!!!
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On Monday, January 17, 2011, SulaMoon
(67) wrote:
Incredible imagery! This piece left me with lustfulness and yearning. I could imagine how it felt to be the person running my lips up and down the man I wish to kiss. Ok....now cold shower ;)
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On Friday, December 24, 2010, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
:::Deep Breath::: Read 2x. I can't think of anything original to say...but wanted to leave you a note letting you know I read...and I enjoyed...and I think it's a great piece.
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On Monday, December 20, 2010, Asylum
(7) wrote:
Were it not for the fact that the title relays the message of homosexuality loud and clear, I would have found myself lunging for a box of kleenex and a bottle of jergins about halfway through this impecable piece of art. (haha..kidding) amazing work shade, as always.
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On Saturday, November 26, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(274) wrote:
yeah your right, the tittle pretty much screamed homosexual.
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A former member wrote:
I love what you've done with Cupid here, shademan :) The image in the first stanza is simply to die for haha... I would suggest that there may be a couple typos... like a verb disagreement with "caress" and "breath" rather than "breathe." Not sure I'm a fan of the double lost area.... and "film" didn't aid the erotic imagery, for me.... but I do like the notion of the underwater burial... I wonder if that couldn't be powerful... a dreamy piece, indeed. well penned, my friend.
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On Monday, December 13, 2010, man of decay
(59) wrote:
Well it's good...I give you that.
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A former member wrote:
hot damn..... but I'm married now :)) well written my friend!! ~ hdb.
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On Friday, December 10, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
I agree with U, well written.... still something 's not right here unless there's a comical twist to it... but I guess that's just me... write on
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On Friday, December 10, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(346) wrote:
Not bad dude.. Not something I see everyday.. Reading it was easier that thought.. "break that film between an underwater burial and crisp fresh air" great line.. expression.
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A former member wrote:
really nice poem ^_^
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