Comments by All Members
- "I couldn't possibly pick out just a few lines that are my fave.. this poem is perfectly flawless... I bow to thee.. Bravo!"
Posted by Unknown on "Green Fire" by purr_verse
- "im actually mesmerized by this peice...it gives me alot of thoughts on my feelings aswell...ty"
Posted by Unknown on "Meaning Less" by purr_verse
- "very nice....i found the wording very clever....i love it ...."
Posted by Unknown on "Bent" by purr_verse
- "His smile was a winter song...
Legendary and I knew it
and you knew I knew it too
Dark as midnight, voice like velvet,
Intensity embodied true, and
I knew then I was your slave girl
You sat back and laughed awhile, and
I saw flames flash through the winter
Through the winter of your smile.
These have to be my fav lines.... a slave girl .... oh my.... you have spoken to my soul on this one...."
Posted by BlackVelvet Rose on "Green Fire" by purr_verse
- "...the eyes dance thru the music of this. you place us in a jail cell, the door is secured by your passion & meter & rhyme, & we're not leaving... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "Green Fire" by purr_verse
- "I loved this, not sure what you were describing, a person or a feeling but it was well done, and i got lost in your words"
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Green Fire" by purr_verse
- "Cool! I'll be the bent slot machine. I've been bent for years...try me! Nice write :)"
Posted by Deathkitten on "Bent" by purr_verse
- "so this popped up on one of my screens and I am thankful, its worth keeping alive"
Posted by Unknown on "Bent" by purr_verse
- "As long as there's a jacket...innocent tone, very sweet words. "I had never fallen from that carousel." Somehow quite inspiring, through the mix of reflection and childhood memories."
Posted by Unknown on "Self: Sufficient" by purr_verse
- "Ive read this one so many times. still one of my favs
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Posted by Dei on "Bent" by purr_verse
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