Comments by All Members
- "Intriguing. A cryptic vibe. I wonder if I played it backwards. "Much Respect *Given*"
Posted by Shaded_Iris on "ash." by Exodus
- "I've read this. I don't know why I didn't comment... Must have been crazy. It's beautiful."
Posted by Unknown on "Heliotrope" by Exodus
- "Sorrow laces your cynical words, nice to have a perfect balance. Emotionally gripping. Great write"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "Plastic." by Exodus
- "Actually the best thing I've read on this site so far, it's just beautiful "
Posted by Unknown on "9 5 6 5" by Exodus
- ""we stare at the sun / and we try to forget / that none of this is real." This ending very much intrigued me. The difference between reality and fiction, or what others want us to think something is... I also got a sense of companionship in the breaking, through the end, lying down...dead? Given up? And then of course, nothing has to be real- but now I'm rambling. You gave me a lot to think about, thank you!"
Posted by Unknown on "A boy named Christian." by Exodus
- "a hint of cynicism and touch of sorrow and meaningful ponderings...this is the kind of poetry I yearn to read..and create. Thank you for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "Plastic." by Exodus
- "that was hard to read...alot of pain evident there.
be strong...no one should dictate whether you live or die. you are human..we all are nice when we need to be.
cheers!"
Posted by natalie on "." by Exodus
- "this pic is so ...captivating .... a once adored history lost to the whim of time ....cool capture! ...thanks for the view!"
Posted by Opklot on "Abandon" by Exodus
- ""
Hesitant to speak to you
Afraid of what might come first
The bullet or the bleeding
Might you be so unpredictable?" Grabbed me the most as thoughts I've felt often. Very interesting imagery throughout."
Posted by Dilated View on "The Darkest of Roses." by Exodus
- "I was curious when I saw the name of this poem...for I have one of the same name...I like it alot!"
Posted by Jaded Jezzabelle on "still" by Exodus
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