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the virgin apple x a shot of eden.
By Exodus
in the spring,
it swells with crimson.
spills out like daisy fumes
callused and opened for infection
the sky bleeds blue again
x the world is cured x
the brand new beginning.
the tide dragged in the savoir
and he washed up, and cried with the land.
his heart is paved with red and poison
hes come back again,
less than he ever was
the blindfold is lifted
and we see again
with the passion of a childs eyes.
x we watch it destroy x
and theres no washing away.
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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Thursday, March 11, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "the virgin apple x a shot of eden."
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A former member wrote:
There's a ton of energy in this piece. I like the way the thoughts are broken up. Good reading. +tpu+
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A former member wrote:
..devastating..your words dance, almost merrily, mocking their song..this could almost have chewed on the edges of my cranium..how entrancing.
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On Monday, March 15, 2004, stormtalk
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wrote:
I see you're experimenting with lots of new things... that's the way to go! I love how you've incorporated more abstraction into your work, but the x's kind of throw me off (I keep reading them as actual x's). Overall, though... absolutely infectious work
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On Friday, March 12, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Wow, this was incredible...
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On Thursday, March 11, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
"his heart is paved with red and poison" is divine!! please accept my complete envy. >:) lovely work as ever; your imagery and format always holds me inside.
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A former member wrote:
never really been good at comments. But I just wanted you to know I really like this poem
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