you make me feel
By Exodus
Thrusts of stars are forced into epilepsy;
Dancing visions of love-making step inside my skin.
I am waves of sanguine woman, swallowing you wholesomely.
I wont forget the good I feel when you are apart of me.
For a few moments, a few inches.
I am taken into depth of an intoxicating fire
Merciless. fire
And baby. I’m like the desert tonight.
You set upon me like its midnight sky.
Under sheets of shut off lights and shut doors.
We have our own little world.
You swept me off my feet in an elevator ride,
Up and down the ways.
We’ve slept inside our dreams together.
My lungs full of delicate fumes. Of a new woman.
You make me feel different.
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Copyright 2005 Exodus
Published on Wednesday, January 5, 2005.
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A former member wrote:
awsum poem!! :)
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A former member wrote:
I love the semi feeling of fullfillment I get while reading this, as if theres somone like that for every one and there's a chance for me
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On Friday, February 4, 2005, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
NICE ONE!!!!!!!!
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On Wednesday, January 19, 2005, Cinn
(152) wrote:
That was amazing. Beautiful write. -Cinn
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A former member wrote:
An enchanting read.
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, Sepulcrawl
(78) wrote:
This is quite wonderful. I am impressed by the sheer magnitude of all of it at once, while i feel something lying dormant in me for release.
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On Thursday, January 6, 2005, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
Ooo. Love-ly. I think this is my favorite of your newer writes; it's seductive and hard-hitting, like an anvil shaped like lingerie.
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A former member wrote:
You are amazing, and that is why you are one of my favorites.
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On Thursday, January 6, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
well done
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A former member wrote:
beautifully written