still

By Exodus

Suffice::

completely

I wander you..

Broken miserably

As I stab aimlessly at the dark

I don’t hide behind the curtains anymore

As I did when I was young with apathy and strange.

so suffice::

Completely missing you.

There is time.

To recklessly take you on and take it over.

Push it over.

DESTRUCTIVE: AND MY HEART SPILLS OVER THE TOP

i drown in it.

We drown.

My delicate.

I have murdered you.

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Published on Monday, January 3, 2005. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "still"

On Wednesday, September 27, 2006, Jaded Jezzabelle (328) wrote:

I was curious when I saw the name of this poem...for I have one of the same name...I like it alot!
A former member wrote: Once again, utterly breathtaking. I am constantly amazed by the beauty of yoyr words.
On Tuesday, January 4, 2005, stormtalk (727) wrote:

I like the last line, of course ;) The rest of it was less clear than your usual work, but exercises in disassociation from normal word combinations are always fun. It's good, but I think you could make it better by clarifying it.
On Tuesday, January 4, 2005, purr_verse (1052) wrote:

this is...excellently quietly disturbing. great stuff.
On Tuesday, January 4, 2005, Cinn (152) wrote:

Very interesting read, nice work. -Cinn
A former member wrote: wow very capturing loved this
On Monday, January 3, 2005, Dei (663) wrote:

wow, dark, twisted, intense, great work. loved it *runs off to read again
On Monday, January 3, 2005, sIo (898) wrote:

this was so....murdermystery like. very nice. i like it hehe.