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still
By Exodus
Suffice::
completely
I wander you..
Broken miserably
As I stab aimlessly at the dark
I don’t hide behind the curtains anymore
As I did when I was young with apathy and strange.
so suffice::
Completely missing you.
There is time.
To recklessly take you on and take it over.
Push it over.
DESTRUCTIVE: AND MY HEART SPILLS OVER THE TOP
i drown in it.
We drown.
My delicate.
I have murdered you.
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Copyright 2005 Exodus
Published on Monday, January 3, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, September 27, 2006, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328)
wrote:
I was curious when I saw the name of this poem...for I have one of the same name...I like it alot!
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A former member wrote:
Once again, utterly breathtaking. I am constantly amazed by the beauty of yoyr words.
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On Tuesday, January 4, 2005, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
I like the last line, of course ;) The rest of it was less clear than your usual work, but exercises in disassociation from normal word combinations are always fun. It's good, but I think you could make it better by clarifying it.
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On Tuesday, January 4, 2005, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
this is...excellently quietly disturbing. great stuff.
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On Tuesday, January 4, 2005, Cinn
(152) wrote:
Very interesting read, nice work. -Cinn
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A former member wrote:
wow very capturing loved this
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On Monday, January 3, 2005, Dei
(665) wrote:
wow, dark, twisted, intense, great work. loved it *runs off to read again
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On Monday, January 3, 2005, sIo
(926) wrote:
this was so....murdermystery like. very nice. i like it hehe.
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