that girl.

By Exodus

My hand is still here.

holding yours.


is it opening or closing for you?


where nothing swells up.
just flows behind.

in a constant moment to dry my eyes.





Broken white to sleep in such lonliness.
only to awoken by its sword.

I'm sullen in my quickest and my try again.

in all and every way.





what is it like to be sure again?




your poison, sipping me until im not almost gone.




i'm tired.










and forever, can i love you?.

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Copyright 2005 Exodus
Published on Tuesday, September 27, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Lovely in it's sadness, as always.

  • A former member wrote: ..even in your inquiries, you seem to have an overwhelming clarity..perhaps I am just extremely confused..however..I found this profound, in its right..thank you.

  • AHHH On Tuesday, September 27, 2005, AHHH (184)By person wrote:

    nice write.

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