Comments by All Members
- "Great poem. I love a visual poem. It's something that escapes my abilities. Inspiring. Thanks, JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "Desire" by DavidVale
- "Wow. Now that was just perfect! Love the detailed parts and the predator point of view. You did a wonderful job on this, I must admit. Excellent short story! =D"
Posted by Unknown on "Prey" by DavidVale
- "The title mislead me, but I did enjoy reading this. You're very good, and I hope you continue writing."
Posted by Unknown on "You Left Me" by DavidVale
- "Sad and good..."can´t we forget the world and just be"? I wish that too, sometimes...beautiful and gingerbread tea sounds delicious. "
Posted by Unknown on "You Left Me" by DavidVale
- "Sounds like a very passionate person, or maybe a territorial animal, marking its turf, well said!"
Posted by dwells on "Bite Marks" by DavidVale
- "whoa this is superbly penned I forgot how to spell completely. I can't seem to make a coherent comment. very well mastered in the pen"
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "Bite Marks" by DavidVale
- ""You see, the word 'love' is a deceitful being" This simple line, has got me thinking now... how in some ways it is true... great work here. "
Posted by Symbol on "Affection" by DavidVale
- "I would have a hard time not liking a true expression of the agony of unrequited love."
Posted by dalphon on "Affection" by DavidVale
- "very clear, powerful piece, with made even more haunting by the effortless rhyming. nice!"
Posted by Northstar on "Tired" by DavidVale
- "Ahh, very unique write; with the kiss I sometimes crave. "
Posted by Unknown on "Kiss" by DavidVale
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