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Kiss
By DavidVale
I hold you close
You hold me
back
There are no words
There's silence,
black
My arms, your hips
Those softest of soft lips
Closing and slow
Neglecting the 'How?'
The initial
touch
It's almost too much
You're gentle,
so sad
And driving me mad
Every night,
near sleep
Dream of eyes so deep
And that very first kiss
If only, I wish...
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Copyright 2012 DavidVale
Comments on "Kiss"
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A former member wrote:
Ahh, very unique write; with the kiss I sometimes crave.
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On Monday, July 9, 2012, Star
(879)
wrote:
soo beautiful i love this...great write (:
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On Monday, July 9, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Awe.. How beautiful.. Hello there and welcome to darkpoetry.. roam around and read others as it will bring them back to you as well.. if you eva need anything i'm a click away..
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On Monday, July 9, 2012, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
I agree with Sin that there's a longing, a deep passionate care and affection written in these words. It gives this piece a soul. It breathes. Breathes passion, ecstasy, want and pleasure. This was definitely a pleasure to read. Welcome to DarkPoetry. We're glad to have you:)
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On Monday, July 9, 2012, Sin
(1135) wrote:
This was nice. The longing came through...seemed a little tentative. To me rhyme in these kinds of poems always seems a bit forced, free verse gives you more range to fully express. nicely done non the less. welcome to dp ~k
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