Our End

By DavidVale

Questions between us unspoken
Vows that should never be broken
Guesses so very untrue
Tainting what used to be pure

Gone is the easy calm silence
The air contains threatening violence
Need to talk, yet neither of us does
And just like that, what is became was

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Copyright 2012 DavidVale
Published on Monday, July 9, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Loved the ending.

  • A former member wrote: Breaking up is all those things, yes.. Why do people stop talking to each other? "And just like that, what is became was" - like an execution. The perfect ending.

  • Devilish On Monday, July 9, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Beautiful .. check your mail... Scholar

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