Comments by All Members
- "ZPT - I think you might prefer "Stopping desolation" in the last line of the first stanza. Meanwhile, this was oozing innocence and hope for a better tomorrow - the magic is inside you, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Falling Stars" by xZombie Poptartzx
- "Jadie is the one who ruined me sadly lol
and i fear he may be un-fixable... I gave up long ago. Sometimes people are just meant to stay broken i guess. xoxo"
Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "Carpenter." by xZombie Poptartzx
- "Some things that are broken n tarnished are the most beautiful. However it can be painful to those that love you to not be able to 'mend' some of your 'scratches'. Jadie used to tell me all the time I couldn't fix people, he hated when other's tried to fix him. I knew, but he helped me understand n accept it. He inspired one of my best pieces because of that, lol - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Carpenter." by xZombie Poptartzx
- "this is just perfect poetry..oh my gosh..the beginning is beautiful..one hell of a piece of poetry... **bows ma'am** "
Posted by Unknown on "Carpenter." by xZombie Poptartzx
- "When reality sets in...truth perspective can be a bitch. Bit then the truth sets us free so we can see real stars for what they really are. Beautiful post - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Falling Stars" by xZombie Poptartzx
- "You are a force to be fondled darling dark princess. thank you so much for showing up after working your ass off all day i love you and appreciate you. "
Posted by Devilish on "Falling Stars" by xZombie Poptartzx
- "Wow...this is deep; I love the rhyming pattern here, your flow is top-level.."Never confusing a satellite for a star, she memorized each constellation.." so poetic...Absolutely amazing, definitely something I will read again; incredible post!
-NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Falling Stars" by xZombie Poptartzx
- "Sounds pretty normal to me and it is an acquired skill, not to worry about stuff we can't control, cheers ZPT!"
Posted by dwells on "Carpenter." by xZombie Poptartzx
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