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Pseudologia Fantastica
By xZombie Poptartzx
If distance was
measured with lies,
you'd be
miles away.
Across oceans
you'd stay,
diligent.
Saving my heart
from your
tide...
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Copyright 2013 xZombie Poptartzx
Published on Monday, July 29, 2013.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
(Contest Entry) Not the best at short stuff, but i gave it a shot.Awards
Comments on "Pseudologia Fantastica"
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On Friday, August 23, 2013, carlosjackal
(2788)
wrote:
Really cool work, smooth flow and hard-hitting message.
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A former member wrote:
Simply hitting the spot! :)
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A former member wrote:
Very clever actually, everyone builds up defensive walls to keep themselves safe, a lot of them forget to make a door as well to let some people in.
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On Sunday, August 18, 2013, Nehema
(958) wrote:
Whoohoo!!! POD!! Gratz gf, awesome piece most deserving - XXOO
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On Sunday, August 18, 2013, Void Vortex
(298) wrote:
Great write. Simplicity is the new complexity for sure.
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On Sunday, August 18, 2013, ruthless48
(172) wrote:
we all have those relationships that are better off, over seas~ Great write! I really enjoyed it!
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A former member wrote:
I loved this...amazing. You captured the whole essence with just a few words. Interesting!
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On Friday, August 9, 2013, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
You gave it a shot and nailed the bull's eye. Very well done ZP. No need to wish any luck for the contest. Til next time -
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A former member wrote:
this is a short one.. but very powerful.. left me with something to ponder upon.. thanks for sharing..
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On Thursday, August 1, 2013, Nehema
(958) wrote:
If only... This is lovely and easily relatable, like a lot of good poetry is - XXOO
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On Wednesday, July 31, 2013, man of decay
(58) wrote:
Simple yet poignant. the analogy comparing lies as a matter of distance was brilliant.
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On Wednesday, July 31, 2013, darkheartmagic
(81) wrote:
outstanding very few words that says a lot good job.
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A former member wrote:
definitely good stuff. Concision works very well here. Nice.
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A former member wrote:
I love how you pulled such emotion. It's beautiful, truly.
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A former member wrote:
i love how a few short words can convey so much feeling and emotion. this is a great little piece, good luck :)
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On Monday, July 29, 2013, blue angel
(866) wrote:
This a 10... oh, those sweet powerful lies...:)~ I hope you win, as well xoxo
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A former member wrote:
lovely. made my heart sigh. :( i know this feeling all too well. well painted.
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On Monday, July 29, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
This is absolutely perfect.. i definitely wasn't expecting it. and i hope you win. you deserve it..
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On Monday, July 29, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Enigmatic yet the nautical simile creates a coherence that speaks to something larger than lies, cheers and best of luck!
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On Monday, July 29, 2013, NarcissusNarcosis
(94) wrote:
I agree with caitlinryen, no more words are needed for this...if distance was determined by the lies one told, we would all live a little happier...I like this, nice point made, great post! -NN
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On Monday, July 29, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium
(273) wrote:
Short and wonderful.. no more words could have described it better.. love this poem!
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