Comments by All Members
- "this one has some self loathing in it. i dont see why.you seem like such a sweet, interesting person. however...i know how you feel. well done."
Posted by Twilight on "Have You Ever?" by XCryingMinotaurX
- "alot of time syou come across those people that you want to make you feel something yet you yearn and beg for them to just leave your emotions the hell alone because they know how to play them...screw people:)"
Posted by Twilight on "When You..." by XCryingMinotaurX
- "this one actually brought some tears to the back of my eyes and chills up and down my spine. to feel the desire you had in your words and to see the pain on your bloodied hands and crying face...truly harsh. beautifulwrite."
Posted by Twilight on "Blood Moon" by XCryingMinotaurX
- "the ending was fucken awesome. awesome!!! i know my mom used to tell me the same thing..and to this day i still wonder...does he really do anything other then cry and bowl? "
Posted by Twilight on "What the Rain Brings" by XCryingMinotaurX
- "herself with her only true love. smiling when i begged to her stop. getthing angrier when i screamed i loved her. she used to offer me a drink..or two..or three. i always told myself iw ouldnever be like her. and i will hold to that. i am so gla dyou have"
Posted by Twilight on ""Mother"...A Word with No Definition" by XCryingMinotaurX
- "how true...im afraid to ever speak an of those words now. look at all the things they hold..i would scare the hell out of myself every time i said one."
Posted by Twilight on "Only Words" by XCryingMinotaurX
- "this was quite powerful. even for how short it was. sometimes people are too blind to see when someone is feeling or saying something. they dont look beyond obvious means."
Posted by Twilight on "In an Email" by XCryingMinotaurX
- "...i cant even think striaght, this one took me for quite the ride. every line sweetly crafted and molded into golden thoughts of true substance. the last stanza..was just perfect. i could think of no other or better way to end it myself. sweet."
Posted by Twilight on "Heard Behind The Cello" by XCryingMinotaurX
- "i have never agreed with anything more in my life. the horrors of the realization..but the consequences of a big mistake. o..the things we do for the ephemeral pleasures..."
Posted by Twilight on "Pills Clean the Womb" by XCryingMinotaurX
- "i truly felt unallowed when reading this one. your inner most thoughts your performing for an audience..[us] trusting that we will understand and see your pain..a thought provoking write and im glad you shared it with us."
Posted by Twilight on "A Journal Entry...Belated Break Down" by XCryingMinotaurX
- "while reading this i was trapped in an emotional spyral of how you felt. almost as if i was insid eyour head..watching your thoughts like a startlingly intriguing movie..beautiful"
Posted by Twilight on "Inside the Blue" by XCryingMinotaurX
- "this one was truly eye opening."i was fooled into a happiness bound in denial and false prayers" i know i have felt this way before...to learn that all along yout belief...yout reliance, was all alie. a waste of time"
Posted by Twilight on "Bowing Out" by XCryingMinotaurX
- "i too liked the last line. but the part that i loved was "a light was shown and reflected upon bloodshot blue eyes
the bones were exposed and the veins ran purple
but saviors are seen in the shine of red satin sheets" fucken awesome. sweet write:)
"
Posted by Twilight on ".Through.Wires." by XCryingMinotaurX
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