When You...

By XCryingMinotaurX

I HATE

when you look at me like that
when you kiss the back of my neck
when you feel you have the right to run your hands thru my hair
when you touch my body
when you make sense
when you dont make any sense
when you talk about other girls
when you talk about fucking
when you talk about making love
when you say you've hated
when you say you've loved
when you are a poet
when you are a writer
when you are a professor
when you are amazing
when you feel the need to freestyle
when you feel the need to freestyle about me
when you are the worst friend in the world
when you are the best friend in the world
when you surprise me
when you tell me to always "stay purple"
when you love it when im rough with you
when you let me be rough with you
when you let me have my way with you
when you tell me I'm your muse
when you tell me I inspire you
when you are my reason for abstract thinking
when you send me cute emails
when you tell me I'm brillant
when you leave me hanging
when you dont call me
when you wont be mine
when you wont share yourself with me
when you make me happy
when you make me smile
when you make me laugh

i HATE when you make me feel...

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Copyright 2003 XCryingMinotaurX
Published on Sunday, November 9, 2003.     Filed under: "Rant"
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  • A former member wrote: "i hate when you make me feel" Its the line that brings everything together, it just rings with truth

  • A Velvet Tongue On Monday, November 10, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (436)By person wrote:

    aint love grand?...heh heh

  • Rebel_Angel On Saturday, February 14, 2004, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    lol that's great...So was this write.

  • A former member wrote: Weird, Creative, Crazy....I like :)

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