The Line Has Already Gone Dead

By XCryingMinotaurX

I am not a poet,
and I am not an artist.
I am not a muse,
and I am not inspiration.

I am heartbroken,
I am utterly love sick.
I am a ticking time bomb,
I am a tortured soul.

You are not a poet,
and you are not an artist.
You are not a muse,
and you are not inspiration.

You are heartbreak,
you are insane and sporatic.
You are a faded falling star,
you are fortune's fool.

I've wasted my time, my energy,
and my emotions on you.
But worst of all,
I've wasted words.


... And you're still waiting to hear them, but the line has already gone dead ...

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Copyright 2004 XCryingMinotaurX
Published on Tuesday, January 27, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Black_Cherry_Doll_ On Saturday, June 4, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (69)By person wrote:

    i agree w/Knight!Awesome write!--Steph

  • knightmirror On Saturday, March 13, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    what the hell do i say to this one*speechless*.knight

  • frost bite On Monday, February 2, 2004, frost bite (43)By person wrote:

    thats a fun write, the anger and emotion flows so freely. nice

  • flying_fox On Tuesday, January 27, 2004, flying_fox (571)By person wrote:

    totally agree with Purr on all statements. I love "you are fortune's fool". great stuff. FF

  • purr_verse On Tuesday, January 27, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    harshly effective, and a very impressive closing line. (And great pic - you have both excellent hair and an excellent cat!) purr

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