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This Was Observed
By XCryingMinotaurX
darkness
except for the soft white glow gleaming off pale hands
reflection
eye to eye but boundaries are still to be tainted
sweat
forehead and palms making movement easier
touch
so much is revealed upon a bed with welcoming prospects
nervous
irony is best when naked bodies first meet
necessary
exchange of bodily fluids making lasting connections stable
pleasure
easily wanted always easily given but not easily understood
sex
giving up more than thought possible but regretting nothing
observations during times like these never seem to make sense but sometimes
its the observations that last longer than the action at hand.
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Copyright 2003 XCryingMinotaurX
Published on Thursday, December 18, 2003.
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On Monday, March 15, 2004, knightmirror
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wrote:
incredible.me likeylikey as my brother would say.the ending was perfect and true.i really like this,again and again.knight ****
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A former member wrote:
if the observation doesn't make any sense then does what was abserved make sense?
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On Thursday, January 1, 2004, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
your observance is divine here, well spaced....you have made it all happen here...............urban
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