This Was Observed

By XCryingMinotaurX

darkness
except for the soft white glow gleaming off pale hands

reflection
eye to eye but boundaries are still to be tainted

sweat
forehead and palms making movement easier

touch
so much is revealed upon a bed with welcoming prospects

nervous
irony is best when naked bodies first meet

necessary
exchange of bodily fluids making lasting connections stable

pleasure
easily wanted always easily given but not easily understood

sex
giving up more than thought possible but regretting nothing



observations during times like these never seem to make sense but sometimes its the observations that last longer than the action at hand.




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Copyright 2003 XCryingMinotaurX
Published on Thursday, December 18, 2003.     Filed under:
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  • knightmirror On Monday, March 15, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    incredible.me likeylikey as my brother would say.the ending was perfect and true.i really like this,again and again.knight ****

  • A former member wrote: if the observation doesn't make any sense then does what was abserved make sense?

  • urbanhumility On Thursday, January 1, 2004, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    your observance is divine here, well spaced....you have made it all happen here...............urban

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