Have You Ever?

By XCryingMinotaurX

Have you ever awoken to see:

the bluest sky
the whitest clouds
the blazing bright sun

Have you ever awoken to smell:

the crispest air
the rotting foliage
the burning woods

Have you ever awoken to feel:

warmth
happiness
love

Have you ever awoken with the purest smile only to watch it dissipate infront of your own teary eyes at the realization that the face in the mirror is still the same as yesterday?

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Copyright 2003 XCryingMinotaurX
Published on Sunday, November 9, 2003.     Filed under:
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  • A former member wrote: amazingly deep, and wonderfully dark. ~S

  • Kinkypoptart On Thursday, April 21, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    awesome write. I love the ending ~*~Tart~*~

  • knightmirror On Monday, March 8, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    you have a way with bringing tears to the suface of my souls window.thank you for sharing.**** as usual.knight

  • yslehc On Saturday, February 14, 2004, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    aw.. lovely poem...

  • Rebel_Angel On Saturday, February 14, 2004, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    Your works are very powerful!

  • urbanhumility On Monday, November 10, 2003, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    intrinsic and cyclical in its balanced diction......hoping earned fourtune will tip in your favor........well spoken ..........urban

  • KittyStryker On Sunday, November 9, 2003, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    goddamn. i love this, and yes i have., often. ::huggles::

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