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Inside the Blue
By XCryingMinotaurX
running
ive run away, baby
i could scrape the taste off my tongue in a second if i wanted to
but i dont
so i wont
at least
not yet
clear mind behind clear eyes will show me the way
on a cloudless day
when the sun doesnt burn them
cause baby, you know how the sun burns me
ive said a lot
and i meant it all
ive given a lot
and i meant it all
my heart, baby
yeah, my heart
but just remember
all those things i said
all the cares i had
all the time i had
all the:
emotion/lust/trust/frienship
all the love i had
you
all for you, baby
they're all in the past tense, baby
yeah, the past tense.
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Copyright 2004 XCryingMinotaurX
Published on Monday, January 12, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Inside the Blue"
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On Tuesday, October 12, 2004, Delphoid-Q
(213)
wrote:
Would make killer lyrics.
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On Saturday, March 13, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
damnit,speechless again.****knight
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On Wednesday, February 25, 2004, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
Weird... I was singing this inside my mind. Great work. :::OLd
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A former member wrote:
its been a long time since i've read something that actually made me tear up. you got me. beautiful work. :-)
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A former member wrote:
interesting style. past tense, yes indeed.
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On Tuesday, January 13, 2004, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
quick and temprate wisdom, you write very well here......urban
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On Tuesday, January 13, 2004, Exodus
(172) wrote:
ya...this was awesome....i like it alot!...Nice work!! really!
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