Inside the Blue

By XCryingMinotaurX

running
ive run away, baby
i could scrape the taste off my tongue in a second if i wanted to
but i dont
so i wont
at least
not yet

clear mind behind clear eyes will show me the way
on a cloudless day
when the sun doesnt burn them
cause baby, you know how the sun burns me

ive said a lot
and i meant it all
ive given a lot
and i meant it all
my heart, baby
yeah, my heart

but just remember
all those things i said
all the cares i had
all the time i had

all the:
emotion/lust/trust/frienship

all the love i had
you
all for you, baby


they're all in the past tense, baby
yeah, the past tense.

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Copyright 2004 XCryingMinotaurX
Published on Monday, January 12, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Delphoid-Q On Tuesday, October 12, 2004, Delphoid-Q (213)By person wrote:

    Would make killer lyrics.

  • knightmirror On Saturday, March 13, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    damnit,speechless again.****knight

  • OLd SouL On Wednesday, February 25, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    Weird... I was singing this inside my mind. Great work. :::OLd

  • A former member wrote: its been a long time since i've read something that actually made me tear up. you got me. beautiful work. :-)

  • A former member wrote: interesting style. past tense, yes indeed.

  • urbanhumility On Tuesday, January 13, 2004, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    quick and temprate wisdom, you write very well here......urban

  • Exodus On Tuesday, January 13, 2004, Exodus (172)By person wrote:

    ya...this was awesome....i like it alot!...Nice work!! really!

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