Comments by All Members
- "this is faded and yellowed with age, a picture captured, I've always wished the mind could do it like a camera, capturing everything perfectly. "
Posted by Lab Rat on "A postcard from my youth" by cadymae
- "I could sit and read everything upon your page, and spew out comment after comment of flowery words. Every one you'd deserve in my humble opinion. But this struck home closer than the others I've read thus far, the taste of it is something I remember vividly. Again, thank you."
Posted by Lab Rat on "At first lick of the lips." by cadymae
- "The sheer weight of this is palpable, I felt this, from the scrapes on elbows and knees to the heat of the flame. This is livable "
Posted by Lab Rat on "Sizzle Stick" by cadymae
- "At the beginning this didn't quite make sense to me, but then I read the author notes and it suddenly became clear .... Momma's Boy. Eloquently explained in this poem. "
Posted by Unknown on "Third Son, Back up Husband" by cadymae
- "" store-made self-directed flat-white takes attention
And a first world to indulge it in." I like this one very much, and I feel this...prentious, useless, indulgent...but so so awesome...:). It is good to have the option of oppulence...and the priviledge of guilt at its enjoyment. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Not Grandma's Sanka" by cadymae
- "I wish I knew the origin of this work. Your words while thoughtfully crafted hold reservation in my eyes. Very well written, I hope you found your release. There seems to be more to this work than meets the eye."
Posted by BloodyMercy on "True enough " by cadymae
- "This is a stunning piece, one persons truth is another persons lie... So how do we ever know who's tellin the truth n who's lying!! Awesome write"
Posted by MissAngelic on "True enough " by cadymae
- "Wise, striking, unrhymed piece. Subtle introspection remarking on a greater picture...I will have to read more of your work. You have a very mature and intelligent voice that seeps clearly through your carefully crafted words. "burned out of me / some out in front"--Artisan quality. 10/10"
Posted by Unknown on "True enough " by cadymae
- "some manufacturer a "truth" so many times that they believe it themselves. Then some live with what is true silent in its grip. A truly wonderful pen."
Posted by Unknown on "True enough " by cadymae
- "Nice job I like how you formated this.
Thanks for sharing and please keep writing. "
Posted by Unknown on "Rebirth" by cadymae
- "the way this was formatted made my eyes feel like they were falling down the page- nice physicality, and i liked the reference to falling down a well/being born."
Posted by Unknown on "Rebirth" by cadymae
- "It had been an interesting year. Most of my works have been composed in my head but then not captured. I have promised myself to write them down more. Thank you for the feedback. You always offer lovely comments."
Posted by cadymae on "Swallowing the sword" by cadymae
- "Wow Cadymae and it's been a while lady. Winners who lose too often might be fooling themselves to just get by. There will not always be that second chance, but there might be a final failure. The Coup d'état I think the French call it, but then they are quite expert at sword swallowing too, cheers! Probably enjoyed this one a bit too much, sorry! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Swallowing the sword" by cadymae
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