A postcard from my youth

By cadymae


You are an exquisite memory

a peaceful afternoon of long lines
     dressed in muscle and mahogony

of attentive surfing on waves of passion
      as they crested and ebbed and eddied

I'll pull you out on long rides
    tossing and turning you now
          as you did me then

I'll smile still, though time tinges it with a sadness
   at how long ago that sunny afternoon was
from where I remember you fondly now.

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Copyright 2012 cadymae
Published on Thursday, July 12, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Lab Rat On Sunday, January 3, 2016, Lab Rat (124)By person wrote:

    this is faded and yellowed with age, a picture captured, I've always wished the mind could do it like a camera, capturing everything perfectly.

  • FadedBlues On Saturday, July 14, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...a poem for us with a 'long ago' to recall. laughter & tears...

  • A former member wrote: I love the title of this poem. So perfect, and the rest of the piece corresponds perfectly. "I'll pull you out on long rides tossing and turning you now as you did me then" stunning.

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