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- "The first line of the third stanza is the perfect description of women in general. This poem should be named " The Revelations of Natelle ""
Posted by Unknown on "per.fection" by SilentStalker
- "the title sums this up beautifully. This brought tears to my eyes, im am happy to have read this... seems like people still do have a way with words :)"
Posted by Unknown on "per.fection" by SilentStalker
- "You write the best horror poems ever. Everyone horrific but yet beautiful with how the words flow. Thank you."
Posted by Star on "It Wakes" by SilentStalker
- "You killed my Father
You laughed whilst he died
My tears you will never see
As i carve his name
In your side
Beautiful poem I had to say a little something :)"
Posted by Unknown on "The Evil Master" by SilentStalker
- "this whole thing made me smile... kinda imagined it set to grunge. reminds me of a song we did back in my high school days... Yearbook. "Every now and then I stay up late, looking at your picture while i masturbate". kudo's dude for finding the funny in function, and perhaps heightening the connection with the poem's intense structuring... which btw doesnt with its strict rhythm make it tedious, the subject matter alleviating such tension. Oh and i defy anyone who wasnt, after reading this, randomly bursting out in melody: "I just wanna muff dive baby, YEAHHHH!" dum damdum dum dum damdum, YEAH!!! "
Posted by Aengri Somnia on "I Just Wanna Muff Dive Baby" by SilentStalker
- "Oh.. This is a masterpiece!.. Great imagery, great structure, great rhymes and great story behind!.. Creepy, horryfing and intense.. I like it very much :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Stalker" by SilentStalker
- "I love this.... so emotional. Brought me to tears... I am totally falling in love with your writing.. the more I read, the more I want to read... awesome job"
Posted by Unknown on "For A Friend(First Tear)" by SilentStalker
- "Your rhymes are just perfect!.. That's excelent poetry.. And the emotions you write about are overwhelming.. First wanting to die as it were something very easy, quick and beautiful.. But then the pain, despair and agony of wanting to live.. But it's too late.. The last stanza sent shivers down my spine.. Very well penned :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Dangling from the Light Fixture" by SilentStalker
- "I like the unique flow of this poem. Sometimes amazing people have trouble seeing how amazing they are. You presented a very romantic image, that was a joy to read."
Posted by Unknown on "per.fection" by SilentStalker
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