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- "I think I prefer the splatter to all the other deaths presented here. I sometimes wonder if it isn't some type of psychological motive that seeks out an apocalyptic end to the world, as if... we don't die alone, as if we're not leaving anything behind, as if... death were writ large, and no longer simply mine. Heh, I remember Faces of Death, when that flick came out, I saw a bit of that and the TV show in this... I like the absence of rhyme, it adds to the finality and somberness of the tone, as does the repetition... making that finality all the more final. The quotations may add a bit of narration, as if an announcer were cataloging the death... an obituary effect, maybe. stay strong, young man, and be well. "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Finality Is Absolute" by Malcholm Dark
- ""Invictus" comes to mind by what's his name? From the personal to the global in a single piece, marvellously wrought. You had me doing a double take though on mugging yourself in the park (HA)! Funny how the mind works, cheers M!"
Posted by dwells on "Finality Is Absolute" by Malcholm Dark
- "perfectly doomy ... I like to think it's only the absolute finality of a chapter , then you can tip-toe into new adventures... write onwards Malcholm ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Finality Is Absolute" by Malcholm Dark
- "stupendous write. and you are correct seasons are fun to pen. I think in a lot of ways a mystery. the way they flow and ebb into one another. Thank you so much for your comment on my poem season's queens. I see I might have to favor you. :) "
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "Take Me Home" by Malcholm Dark
- "hahaha keep all the tree huggers chained to the trunk, Let loose the chainsaw . lol just teasing but I know what you mean about haiku, can't write it for nothing. great pen!"
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "Tall Trees Suck" by Malcholm Dark
- "We used to call that the 4-F club (you added one more) - my condolences to your deflated friend, next time don't bite so hard! Cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Plastic Companion" by Malcholm Dark
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