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"Poetry is definitely a good way to express yourself and study the English language. I enjoyed how you wrote this is story-form. Good stuff. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Chapter 7.5 Fear and Bravery" by Henry Coldnight

"Very, very visual poem and a unique vision at that. Great poem. Love it. JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "Chapter 1 A Fire in the Hole!" by Henry Coldnight

"Liked this alot. Really great job."
Posted by Unknown on "M'lady, an Answer" by Henry Coldnight

"Caught her but can't be satisfied with that alone. hm. I like it."
Posted by Miztaken4beauty on "Chapter 13 Endless Winter and the Circle of Hatred" by Henry Coldnight

"A few typo's... But truly beautiful, I especially like the last two verses... I thought... "what noble creature this is" :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Chapter 11 A Lily in the Snow" by Henry Coldnight

"this is impressive, i actually really enjoy this...well done"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Man Vs Grand Canyon" by Henry Coldnight

""She will be burned, just like all the leaves who refuse to leave"... Thank you for so delicately depitcting my life in a story form poem."
Posted by OverratedGirl on "A Leaf in the Fall" by Henry Coldnight

"for some reason, I had Donnie Darko on the brain while I was reading this... or perhaps a flick produced by Rob Zombie. It's a gut-wrenching tale told from an innocent point of view, making it almost light-hearted, yet underlaced with the sense of dread that comes from knowing there's nothing the reader can do to stop the tragedy dabbled throughout. Hooked me through to the end, until I closed my eyes..."
Posted by Sketso on "Fly, Caroline, Fly" by Henry Coldnight

"weird this poem works well as both a short story and a free verse poem I donâ€™t know if you intended it to flow that way but the structure just draws you in and makes you want to read on and onâ€¦ slightly humorous as well "â€¦ my little brother was bullying his imaginaryâ€ COL (chuckle out loud) "
Posted by Everlasting Gobstopper on "Fly, Caroline, Fly" by Henry Coldnight

"You're a very creative guy Henry. Keep writing!"
Posted by DarkPoet on "The Tree of Wonders, the Wondering Tree" by Henry Coldnight

"Pretty and fun. Lightness throughout...and then the end...so very profound. Delightful write."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Observant--the Story of a Dried Lotus Fruit" by Henry Coldnight

"Please leave a comment before you go! I'm very curious about what you guys think of this since it's kinda different from what I usually do, haha! "
Posted by Henry Coldnight on "Sniper (by Coldnight)" by Henry Coldnight

"Bravo and Second. This is the way it should be. To protect those he loves is any real man's deepest desire, and honor and respect should be his due."
Posted by Scarrzz on "M'lady, an Answer" by Henry Coldnight

"i loved the phrase "petals of blood" - almost seductive & great little piece all in all"
Posted by Riven Waker on "Lost Chapter -The Beauty" by Henry Coldnight

"ohhhhhhhhh... beautiful. i love this. *sigh* the last stanza was a shot in my heart. i love it. -mars"
Posted by Mars on "Lost Chapter -The Beauty" by Henry Coldnight

"the stopstill e.motion of this was exquisitely thoughtout. and the watching refernce adds a .....[gulp] sensuality. near intangible sensuality. really a stunning piece for me."
Posted by Unknown on "Lost Chapter -The Beauty" by Henry Coldnight

"I really liked this. ~ hdb."
Posted by Unknown on "Lost Chapter -The Beauty" by Henry Coldnight

"for some reason a really liked you exclamations. they usually bother me, but they worked amazingly for this. nice job =]"
Posted by BrokenAngel on "Simple Sonnet - Life" by Henry Coldnight

"Nicely composed-I like! Enjoyed the tone of this piece, light and playful while delivering a strong message. The final stanza brings things to a close neatly and leaves us with some thinking to do. Kudos, excellent piece."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Simple Sonnet - Life" by Henry Coldnight

"*hums* even though music, singing, and writing aer pretty much my life, I dont think, I could ever,.....answer that. *hugs* awesome wite bitter night. ^^ ~moon (only on weekends)"
Posted by Unknown on "Angel's Song" by Henry Coldnight

"Loved it. It seems so simple in words. How do we make them see. Well done"
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "M'lady, an Answer" by Henry Coldnight

"I'm honored by your response write. I love this, especially the last stanza. I wonder how we get back to this kind of courtly, honorable love..."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "M'lady, an Answer" by Henry Coldnight

"nice response work... battle worn, but honor and respect in those wild eyes - the center of a man, in the center of your write - says it all"
Posted by Sketso on "M'lady, an Answer" by Henry Coldnight

"I like this. Good response to a great poem. Well, most prince charmings are too shallow to be echoed. -mars"
Posted by Mars on "M'lady, an Answer" by Henry Coldnight

"Wonderful uplifting write. Excellent message."
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "One Bright Burning Soul" by Henry Coldnight

"i dont know why i like it, i wont try to describe it, im just gonna fave it"
Posted by whisperer on "Chapter 13 Endless Winter and the Circle of Hatred" by Henry Coldnight

"sun is ever bright. i like that."
Posted by Unknown on "Waking Up from...Death" by Henry Coldnight

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