Comments by All Members
- "I don't know why but this had a calming effect for me. That last stanza was so calmly beautiful that I had to read it a few time to really let it sink in its a mm little long but may be worth an entry anyways"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "I, Now, Then." by Aleas
- "Your flow...hot damn...I wish I could flow so effortlessly like that. I'm jealous. I think I might have to start hating you for being so much better than me lol"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Of You." by Aleas
- "This is is so profound and remarkable that it totally blew me away. I can't believe it doesn't have a million comments innit praising your skill and Raw talent."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Here and Gone (Dear God)." by Aleas
- "Such a perfect flow. The words trickled down the page and seemingly changed colors as it went to match the different emotions expressed. This may be a little long but man it sure is awesome."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Undertow (Drown Me Now)." by Aleas
- "Man...stop making me feel feelings. It hurts. And makes me want to cry and hug you so tight you forget any pain you have ever felt."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Godsent Goodbye." by Aleas
- "Ugh. This hurts. You make me feel as if we view the world in the same light and hearing such familiar words the resonate in my soul stings. Ouchies."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Ocean Promises." by Aleas
- "This. My guy is super smarty mcgoo. He deciphered this in such a poetic way. This isn't long winded at all. It is perfect and I read it in a whisper. It is amazing"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Begging; Still." by Aleas
- "The title of this alone breaks my heart. This also is a tad too long I think but is one of those that might be worth an extra page. "
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas
- "This was so beautiful and read do cleanly . You do tend to write longer piece which is amazing because every word is perfect and. There is no fat to trim on them. It's just beautiful to read."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "The Songs We Sing." by Aleas
- "This felt more straight forward but also more twisted than the others I read. It seems like you understand it on the first read but then by the end you begin o doubt what you thought this really was."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Forever and a Secret." by Aleas
- "Acrostics are so tricky to make work but you pulled it off beautifully. This is also worth a submission and would easily fit on a single page"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "The Hint I Missed." by Aleas
- "This seemed to flow without even meaning to. This might not be too long to enter. It is a fantastic piece. I'm not sure if it would fit in a single page but it's definitely worth a review."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Alt / red." by Aleas
- "This reads so chaoticly. The format gives it is flair so it may not fit well in a book but the piece itself is very impressive and so different. I love the title too."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Sunspot." by Aleas
- "Simply one of the greatest I've read in a long time. Thank you for that. -mars"
Posted by Mars on "Of You." by Aleas
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