Sunspot.

By Aleas

In a whisper it flew
Simply a thought in passing
And implanting a seed
     with fallopian dissent
     b/low intensities and increasing body heat

M-m-m-myyyyyy corona.

Ever bursting in search for one single moment, i thirst

For something similar to that feeling of

          the < abs > value of one - (the negative one) me - (the positive one) she -

And I....am

Intohernow, internal; set apart
My sleeping beauty melanin
Moved through me like adrenaline
As a handshake to the heart
Whose chambers wall line
With velvet
White wine
And...Chinese Magnolia Vine
That twist and maze through this 'single moment theory' 

And this theory

So relatively introduced
Literally
As the death blow from a polar rain drop persisting simply as a black hole echo of forever and only in a certain circadian carpe diem deism
Becoming the Ground of which all other rhythm

Originate.

And such a tempo has a tendency to set Her satin outline...Mmm...

On vibrate.

This silo / wet tease, pulsed and pearled
Showing how She's lived an entire world

And kept just about it all in sight

So that when She aims

She aims to please
Behind closed eyelids
Backlit blinded
Almost neverminded
Even in vibrant dreams

Where She spends Her days
As a whisper
Simply a thought in passing
And implanting a seed
     The dissident foreworded
     That could not be aborted

That She

        Will Always Pray

                                 For me.

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Copyright 2011 Aleas
Published on Friday, October 28, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • soul_versing On Wednesday, September 10, 2014, soul_versing (774)By person wrote:

    All I know is... there is a familiar earthly feel coursing through my veins,, as of now... the way you describe fragmented thoughts with echoing detail is genius because you allow your reader to depict their own sense of meaning/conclusion. It's a slow process to decipher the intent of your write, but it's so damn inviting that I latched on to every word until its end. I find it nice to imagine what it's like to live in someone else's thoughts. ... you've left me with a smile on my face. Scholar

  • PoetessDarkly On Sunday, January 27, 2013, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    awesome. the ending is spectacular. I hope to read more of your talent.

  • Nehema On Sunday, July 8, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    I've haven't read a style like this, ever I think. How fun, and the poem itself beautiful. I don't know who this woman is to you, but it reminded me of a couple in my life. Glad I found you, look forward to reading more. - XXOO Scholar

  • A former member wrote: I saw you. You were there for but a second. But I saw you. And this was a wonderful write. Scholar

  • dwells On Saturday, October 29, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Drifting feeling I got in the middle until you pulled me back for a very strong finish, thanks and much enjoyed this.

  • A former member wrote: This is really potent writing. Labyrinthine yet calming effect. Very excellent piece, Aleas.

  • A former member wrote: gawds, your writing has been missed....the depth and scope and reality of it...the making of a beauty full scape . .. .the wordplay is excellent. captivating.

  • haunted On Friday, October 28, 2011, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    awesome, at one point i thought you were refering to a vibrator, but im sick in the head! i loved this though. great writing!

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