Sunspot.
By Aleas
In a whisper it flew
Simply a thought in passing
And implanting
a seed
with fallopian dissent
b/low intensities
and increasing body heat
M-m-m-myyyyyy corona.
Ever bursting in search for one single moment, i thirst
For something similar to that feeling of
the < abs > value of one - (the negative one) me - (the positive
one) she -
And I....am
Intohernow, internal;
set apart
My sleeping beauty melanin
Moved through me like
adrenaline
As a handshake to the heart
Whose chambers wall
line
With velvet
White wine
And...Chinese Magnolia Vine
That twist and maze through this 'single moment theory'
And this theory
So relatively introduced
Literally
As the death blow from a polar rain drop persisting simply as a
black hole echo of forever and only in a certain circadian carpe
diem deism
Becoming the Ground of which all other rhythm
Originate.
And such a tempo has a tendency to set Her satin
outline...Mmm...
On vibrate.
This silo / wet
tease, pulsed and pearled
Showing how She's lived an entire world
And kept just about it all in sight
So that when
She aims
She aims to please
Behind closed eyelids
Backlit blinded
Almost neverminded
Even in vibrant dreams
Where She spends Her days
As a whisper
Simply a
thought in passing
And implanting a seed
The dissident
foreworded
That could not be aborted
That She
Will Always Pray
For me.
Awards
Comments on "Sunspot."
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On Wednesday, September 10, 2014, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
All I know is... there is a familiar earthly feel coursing through my veins,, as of now... the way you describe fragmented thoughts with echoing detail is genius because you allow your reader to depict their own sense of meaning/conclusion. It's a slow process to decipher the intent of your write, but it's so damn inviting that I latched on to every word until its end. I find it nice to imagine what it's like to live in someone else's thoughts. ... you've left me with a smile on my face.
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On Sunday, January 27, 2013, PoetessDarkly
(693) wrote:
awesome. the ending is spectacular. I hope to read more of your talent.
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On Sunday, July 8, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
I've haven't read a style like this, ever I think. How fun, and the poem itself beautiful. I don't know who this woman is to you, but it reminded me of a couple in my life. Glad I found you, look forward to reading more. - XXOO
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A former member wrote:
I saw you. You were there for but a second. But I saw you. And this was a wonderful write.
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On Saturday, October 29, 2011, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Drifting feeling I got in the middle until you pulled me back for a very strong finish, thanks and much enjoyed this.
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A former member wrote:
This is really potent writing. Labyrinthine yet calming effect. Very excellent piece, Aleas.
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A former member wrote:
gawds, your writing has been missed....the depth and scope and reality of it...the making of a beauty full scape . .. .the wordplay is excellent. captivating.
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On Friday, October 28, 2011, haunted
(837) wrote:
awesome, at one point i thought you were refering to a vibrator, but im sick in the head! i loved this though. great writing!