Comments by All Members
- "So many wonderful lines here. I fell in love with the idea of not wanting to fall out of love. I hope you return soon, I've missed your (Quote_Unquote) face. -Later guy"
Posted by soul_versing on "Monuments." by Aleas
- "I'm sad. Don't stop. Don't stay away. You have such talent for writing. :-("
Posted by Cantara on "Monuments." by Aleas
- "I cannot help it but. I found this read to be completely sexy. Um that and, I read this in a French accent, kinda. I don't speak French and it sounded a lot better than saying, I played with your words in my mouth. haha. I envy your ability to write. -Cheers"
Posted by soul_versing on "Dare/Dream." by Aleas
- "I just don't feel worthy enough to comment. My brain is still soaking it in and it's quite liberating. "
Posted by soul_versing on "Along the Way." by Aleas
- "I can't believe you just lost interest in writing. You were so damn good at it. Talented. You can't stop. I love the winding of intimacy and hurt and the other feelings you got across still raw. An unusual writing. "
Posted by Cantara on "Begging; Still." by Aleas
- "Beautifully written, captures melancholy of ships passing in night, and divergent courses when once were parallel"
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Ocean Promises." by Aleas
- "And who knows how many opportunity's are missed because they go by without a second thought or the slightest fear snatches them away... A very thought provoking piece. I like that. Great work Aleas. "
Posted by Magdalena on "Along the Way." by Aleas
- "All I know is... there is a familiar earthly feel coursing through my veins,, as of now... the way you describe fragmented thoughts with echoing detail is genius because you allow your reader to depict their own sense of meaning/conclusion. It's a slow process to decipher the intent of your write, but it's so damn inviting that I latched on to every word until its end. I find it nice to imagine what it's like to live in someone else's thoughts. ... you've left me with a smile on my face. "
Posted by soul_versing on "Sunspot." by Aleas
- "This is beautiful and sorrowful. In matters of the heart, I don't think we can have one without the other.. Wonderful work. "
Posted by Magdalena on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas
- "i believe the title say sit all.....and the use of the acrostic form was in my opinion sheer brillance!!!! although the heading already suggests that by missing the hint u lost someone of value, the form tends to enhance that fact. cudos!!! "
Posted by natalie on "The Hint I Missed." by Aleas
- "You're an interesting writer. I love free verse. I also write in free verse. I noticed that you pay attention to the flow of the sound of the words. Like writing music. I do the same. When will you post more recent writing?"
Posted by Cantara on "Undaunted, Unwanted, and Regrettably Unnoticed." by Aleas
- "I can't believe you said these weren't good. They are very well written and original. Emotional roller coasters. Your emotions and thoughts and desires are so richly flavoring every word that I can hardly stand do it. You go a he lead and be your own harshest critic. but you have obvious talent and such a beautiful mind."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Along the Way." by Aleas
- "I can't stand.your flow. It is too perfect and I am a jealous person. I'm gonna use voodoo to steal your talent for myself. Lol this may be the perfect length to fit I a single glee page as well."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Dare/Dream." by Aleas
- "I just adore your titles. They could stand alone I think. They are beautiful and intriguing. This again may be a little too long but I do love it. Your emotions seem to be a complex labyrinth in your brain. And these posts are your attempts to navigate those complex emotions"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Metal Noose." by Aleas
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