Comments by All Members
- "I am me and you are you! Nice sense of rebillion. Refusing to be a "piece in everyones game" be you and be proud. More people should be this way! Love it ! Great piece "
Posted by Unknown on "Pawns,Kings,and Me" by LOKI
- "What! You dare to deny the superiority of the masterminds! The peasant gall that oozes from your base beating heart and minimal mind is pathetic - Loved this one LOKI, thanks!"
Posted by dwells on "Pawns,Kings,and Me" by LOKI
- "A pawn among kings. I loved the concept of your work. This mind set has set the bar for socialism for decades. You are what we tell you to be because we are above you. A test of strength and fear of rebellion. A classic tale. Thanks for the read! "
Posted by With love_Crow on "Pawns,Kings,and Me" by LOKI
- "*you're* just a pawn... aren't we all, yep, kings and pawns and everything in between to the eyes of onlookers any given day, maybe. thanks for the read."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Pawns,Kings,and Me" by LOKI
- "this poem reminds me of last night when I was cutting and cut over a cut and it hurt really bad and even after it healed it still hurts
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Posted by Unknown on "My Blood,My Pain[Help Me]" by LOKI
- "Beautifully written, I could feel the confusion and pain, didn't know what it was really about til I read the note at the end. Thanks for sharing - never had a concussion myself (knocking on wood) - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "My Blood,My Pain[Help Me]" by LOKI
- "Hey Loki and glad this was in the past. It sounds like the memories still haunt you, but you seem to have a good grip on things. Keep writing and let it all out when necessary, cheers pal!"
Posted by dwells on "My Blood,My Pain[Help Me]" by LOKI
- "Wow.. I was in a truck accident as well at 15 .. The driver thought it would be cool to do some stupid shit going 58 and the truck clipped the right side of the highway then went air born flippin 2 in a half times in the air then 4 more when it landed. I had my jaws broke and completely severed the right side of my face from the bone. I wore a crown screws and blots and wires for almost 3 months.. this here brought back that very moment. wow . i cant even imagine what would of happened if I were riding in the back and now I know. I pray your ok and thank you for sharing,. much respect."
Posted by Devilish on "My Blood,My Pain[Help Me]" by LOKI
- "We do what we have to until we can do what we want - that's my story & I'm stickin to it! Excellent write - reminded me of Woody Guthrie - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "5 A.M. " by LOKI
- "I used to get off at 6:30 AM on Saturdays, worked nights. Enjoyed the moral thrust of this piece - and the "Bene Gessirit Litany Against Fear" in your profile, thanks! "
Posted by dwells on "5 A.M. " by LOKI
- "5 am on Saturday? Inhumane I say, but I know we all have different schedules. Great work. "
Posted by Labella Blue on "5 A.M. " by LOKI
- "..it's got a nice blues feel to it. real life for sure..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "5 A.M. " by LOKI
- "This poem is amazing and i agree with everyone else. It conveys a very true message. "
Posted by Unknown on "First They Bleed" by LOKI
- "How did I never read this when it came out?? Wonderfully depicted and the imagery was breath taking. Thank you
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Posted by Loketha Angel on "The Art of War" by LOKI
- "Most people on this site think they write evil shit but this is real and dark and I like the word sledgehammer the other commenter used. Very sad but a true situation for many."
Posted by Alchemist on "Only Heaven Can Wait" by LOKI
- "The second to the last stanza is killer, I read it and was like damn I wish I would have wrote that."
Posted by Alchemist on "Warrior Song" by LOKI
- "Your works speak to me, yes, there are people on this site who are better writers than you but your work has power that theirs don't. After the last few pieces I have read of yours I think your my new favorite poet and now I have to read all your poetry."
Posted by Alchemist on "Slow Motion In A Dream" by LOKI
- "The blood is sweet in the teeth of greed....The ones that reep this taste have no needs.-This work is brutally beautiful-"
Posted by Alchemist on "Rivers Run Red" by LOKI
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