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Slow Motion In A Dream
By LOKI
Im a simple man
I want simple things
I build my life
around simplicity
Yet it gets complicated
Like running slow motion in a dream
when they tell you to be something
you dont want to be
But,I dont wear that mask
because I am not afraid
I am who I am
I would'nt hide it for a thing
Some say thats my weakness
believe me its my strength
Im just passing through this world
no one will remember me
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© 2006 LOKI
Published on Sunday, November 12, 2006.
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On Tuesday, November 29, 2011, Alchemist
(688)
wrote:
Your works speak to me, yes, there are people on this site who are better writers than you but your work has power that theirs don't. After the last few pieces I have read of yours I think your my new favorite poet and now I have to read all your poetry.
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A former member wrote:
You see thats the craziest thing. Do you or do you not want to be remembered. My Biggest fear is passing through life unremembered. I pray daily I do something I can be remembered for. I strive for it. I want it, I NEED IT!! ][ ][
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On Sunday, November 12, 2006, LOKI
(164) wrote:
tahnk you all for the feed back I appreciate your thoughts
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A former member wrote:
i will remember you my friend. very powerful write.
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On Sunday, November 12, 2006, Lady Grinning Soul
(145) wrote:
this was beautiful, straight to the point, although i would also agree with carlos because people will remember you even if you think you are passing through the world.
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On Sunday, November 12, 2006, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Great write. Straight to the point. Write on.
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On Sunday, November 12, 2006, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
Yes, sometimes it is the voices outside our heads out to get us! Being face naked in society in itself complicates things!I agree with Carlos tho-cause I wondered if you had left. So there! A:D.
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On Sunday, November 12, 2006, carlosjackal
(3015) wrote:
A fantastic poem. I would only change the last line as I believe you're likely to be remembered for being yourself than hiding behind a mask.
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On Sunday, November 12, 2006, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...true, but at least if you do it right, some people will spend a lifetime trying to forget you...
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On Sunday, November 12, 2006, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
lol!
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On Sunday, November 12, 2006, LOKI
(164) wrote:
I live by it
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On Sunday, November 12, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
beautifully exposed..... captures the true nakedness of my soul.... amazing.
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On Sunday, November 12, 2006, LOKI
(164) wrote:
thank you I was inspired by a quote Better to be hated for who you are than loved for who your not
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On Sunday, November 12, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
wisdom... at it's best.
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On Sunday, November 12, 2006, blue
(1454) wrote:
hai.
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