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Rivers Run Red
By LOKI
In another world
place and time
When men were gods
and women divine
Worlds collided
for the sake of land
and so began the reign of man
New worlds were conquered
and innocent's were slayed
A plague of death
that brought suffering and pain
War was rich
with the blood of men
Death conquered all
and the rivers ran red
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© 2006 LOKI
Published on Sunday, November 19, 2006.
Filed under:
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Comments on "Rivers Run Red"
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On Tuesday, November 29, 2011, Alchemist
(688)
wrote:
The blood is sweet in the teeth of greed....The ones that reep this taste have no needs.-This work is brutally beautiful-
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On Friday, December 1, 2006, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
*Headbangs*
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A former member wrote:
All I can do is agree wtih the others on this. Wonderfully powerful. --Kaosu
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A former member wrote:
Damn, This was striking and strong. It's sad and true. "A plague of death
that brought suffering and pain
War was rich
with the blood of men
Death conquered all
and the rivers ran red"
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A former member wrote:
I love the way you make your poetry come alive and back to death:-) Amazing ][ ][
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On Sunday, November 19, 2006, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
Enjoyed the flow, and the sad touch of recollection of a remorseful history...and recent conflicts sadly too.
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A former member wrote:
this was an amazing poem from you my friend!! i loved the flow of it! nicely done ~ redneck
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