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  • "That seems somewhat hopeful. What were the changes made? For me, the day when I really decided I wanted to let go of any hope of what I really wanted ( the love of the woman I had opened my heart to) was the day when I started to cope with the pain better. The scars are indeed forever, but at least I can breathe. * BTW, nice meter in this one."
    Posted by Scarrzz on "Carried Away" by suicidalsecrecy
  • "I believe this may be the most powerful concise poem I've seen. In so few words you've conveyed an utterly hopeless and helpless plea for salvation. I do hope that somehow you are lifted up."
    Posted by Scarrzz on "Fallen" by suicidalsecrecy
  • "Not so much. The only hope I know of is that I can guarantee that I don't know what the future will bring. Some days that is enough to keep trying."
    Posted by Scarrzz on "Hello" by suicidalsecrecy
  • "Seems to me that your biggest demon is a reflection in the mirror..likewise..it takes one to know one..relate to the empty hollowness"
    Posted by Amphigorist on "Bound" by suicidalsecrecy
  • "I totally dig this. I love that you point out that the whole world is crazy too, but only the "freaks" get called out on it. Good write!"
    Posted by Unknown on "Idle Hands" by suicidalsecrecy
  • "Makes me think of the quote, "you can't fire me because I quit." It starts me thinking about the point of view of the person contemplating suicide and the aftermath. I myself have thought about this and about what my family would say. My mother crying and my dad very emotional saying, "you stupid idiot, why would you do that?" "
    Posted by Unknown on "Idle Hands" by suicidalsecrecy
  • "I can relate to the comforting qualities of locking one's mind away, shrouded in it's own veil of darkness. The hurt stay hurt and the pain throbs from within the recesses of layers smitten with self defeat. Self loathing yet done unto by others..Hatred for self..is not really hate..but a way to numb the pain, even if temporary...I drowned within your soul..dark..bleak..May one hope that 6yrs later things have improved somewhat.."
    Posted by Amphigorist on "Only The Scars Remain" by suicidalsecrecy
  • "Excellent. Lots of people cut. Like my friend who doesnt really care who knows (except her parents). She likes to feel the pain to make sure she knows how worthless she is. I also have some permant memories etched into me. So if you feel like talkin send "
    Posted by Unknown on "SCARS" by suicidalsecrecy
  • "Awwwwww...I know someone who does this, and I know someone who used to...it was only through help that either of them stopped, even if one only stopped for a while...this is a beautifully painful write...rhyme scheme is perfect. Thank you. *Evangel*"
    Posted by Unknown on "My Sweet Prince" by suicidalsecrecy
  • "Very nice rhyme scheme, and yet you still stay on topic. Very well done. Killer piece, too."
    Posted by Thorn on "Escape" by suicidalsecrecy
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