The Breakup

By suicidalsecrecy

pressure building
temperature scalding
hot sun
inside a
melting pot
i look
to find
and search
the light
for darkness
that is
mine all
that i
see in
remembrance of
you are
scorch marks
that remain
forever parched
in my
heart

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Published on Sunday, October 23, 2005. Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"

Comments on "The Breakup"

On Sunday, May 15, 2011, ColorMeToxic (238) wrote:

I really liked this write too. :)
On Monday, May 16, 2011, suicidalsecrecy (42) wrote:

Thanks :)
On Sunday, November 6, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (151) wrote:

I do really like this write. Thanks for referring it to me. :) Your very talented.
On Sunday, October 23, 2005, Thorn (282) wrote:

Very well written. I "scorch marks that remain forever parched in my heart" I liked that line a lot.